Y u stop wrighting

MORE MORE MORE Please I BEG you! you can't tease angst and just leave it unresolved!

(This story is really good btw)

Love it!

Good so far the implied rape with that kaja guy was a bit to far tho

that is good. update soon please.

Great start it's up to you whether you want to make this story more mature :)

You have a lot of different subplots going on, which is cool. It was a good chapter, but there was a little thing I noticed. In the sentence "Weather it was about sharing happy times..." You used "Weather " wrong. The correct spelling for the correct way would be "whether" The other is when you are taking about the temperature and stuff. It's not tag big of a deal, so don't worry too much about it. Other than that, this was a great chapter.

About the rating, I'm okay either way. I would like to know exactly who this Kaja dude is. Was he a prison guard or something? Anyway, if you feel okay with writing an M chapter, then go for it. Just don't forget to put a warning at the beginning because some might not want to read that and can skip the explicit parts.

Please update soon.

-FC

I really like how complex this story is, so many things happening at the same time :) One second, it's sweet, the other it's dark... Knowing the type of guy Ozai is, it makes perfect sense for him to look out for an opportunity to escape. That'll be fun to read, for sure.
I don't know what to say about the raiting though. I'm cool with it either way.
Can't wait for the next chapter :)

A nice first two chapters to a story. The Aang and Katara part was real sweet, and I could see Aang doing all those things for her on her special day. It was interesting how you transitioned from the Kataang fluff to something a little darker with Mai. Looking forward to more. Please update soon.