The Lion KingJungle Book, amazing!

Instead of Simba's Pride, it would be better about Lion Guard because Kaa would cooperate with Ushari and it's like a combo if you get what I mean because Kaa will hypnotize Kion and use his roar to take down Simba and use him for personal use also controlling the entire Pridelands.

So, my suggestions is to use The Lion Guard timeline and there is more character to react with. Just sharing my idea though

That was the most incredible story ever

This is such a good story!

The story was good.
But no bad thing's it's just on chapter 10 needs a little more fact. And a little more bit more war and how scar was defeated.

Please make more like if kaa was fighting for the pride land with Simba and more fighting like that.

Wait, you don't mean the same Kaa from "The Jungle Book"?

This was amazing. It did get a bit dark knowing some beloved Disney characters died, so I think this was appropriately rated. Amazing writing by the way. Hardly any grammar errors! :)

Jungle book... COOL!:))

Well...I think you could make Kaa hypnosis Zira, for she's totally insane in the sequel (smirk evilly).

I loved this story! The concept was very interesting, and it was refreshing. I haven't read a mind controlled Simba before, and I gatta say, I enjoyed it! Are you going to make a sequel? I think it would be cool to see how Simbas mother and the other lions would react to how Simba was controlled. Anyways, thanks for the great story :)

It was good but, it has a abrupt ending. Kaa said he'd be back so, is he going to go after Kiara?

you should write a sequel. I think it would be cool. Go into Lion King Two. I would totally read it. Please you must do a sequel. Also if you were to create a sequel could you add an OC of mine.

Name: Akiri
Gender: female
Species: panther
Age: about 15
Appearance: black with white paws, white tail tip, white tuft of fur on hair, and green eyes
Personality: shy, but loyal. she is kind, but fierce. she thinks she needs to repay any and all debts that she accumulates from others.
Skills: she is a skilled hunter and fighter. she can climb trees extremely well.
Bio: Kaa saves her much like he saved Simba, but he doesn't hypnotize her. When Kaa makes a move against Pride Rock she feels guilty and warns the Lionesses and Simba. She becomes good friends with Kiara. When Kaa discovers she has betrayed him he tries to kill her and Kiara saves her along with Kovu another friend Akiri makes. She also has a panther friend named Lee. He is her exact opposite in everything. Later in life they have four cubs. Two girls and Two boys. Their names will be Alan (boy), Tracy (girl), Wes (boy), and Serena (girl). They are born in that order. Tracy and Wes are twins.

You can decide the cubs appearance, personality, and skills. Please consider adding these characters to any sequel to this story please.

oh poor Nala. hope she doesn't die. Please continue

Don't let it end that way.