good chapter and update soon

I'm giving it a shot Now where is the rest of the story ? If you are not gonna continue why even start?

You gotta update! This story is amazing as well!

Hmm this could become a great story. Good luck!

Please update

wHAT THE HELL ARE YOU WAITING !? update already!

I hope naruto wings miya and no.4

this seems pretty good so far please update soon

Nice start can only imagine how this will progress so keep up the great work!

Post FSW Naruto, Second Coming of the Rikudo Sennin, only "strong" tossed in the Sekirei world? Yea good luck with that buddy. At that level the Sekirei's couldn't possibly hope to beat him. If you wanted only "strong" then it should have been before he got SM or KCM like after the Rasenshuriken training. Your story your rules etc etc. Don't be too upset if some people say that you nerfed him.

Hmmm, this looks interesting. Please continue.

Conscious - State of being awake.
Conscience - Moral compass or sense of right and wrong.

The one you want is the first one.

I am looking forward to this Naruto you described in your author note.
This first chapter shows a lot of promise. I even already added this to my favourites!
Looking forward to the next chapter.

Awesome prologue.
Ya could've detailed how the pressure felt to the both of them like Minaka; could've seen his own body being crushed till it exploded from the crushing force. Takehito could've thought that he was going die right then and there just like that, instead of the word "fuck" for the both of them.
Otherwise, AWESOME!
Side note, please keep Kusano cute and funny like in the anime.
That is all.

When yu said naruto is strong, is is miya strong or more/less?