Reviews for Forbidden Attraction |
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Isao84 chapter 17 . 7/16 Aw! That was a sweet short story. I love how Mary wasn’t irrational. And how they treated Alice. I liked it. |
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 7 . 7/10 Is it me or was this tantrum by Bella out of place? She just told him that she couldn't enjoy college life because of him... What the fuck is he suppose to say or think to that? And she's already pretty experienced, Why hasn't Edward said anything about that? Her tantrum is absoulely asisine, he is a 44 year old man, and she is what? 19? He has known since she was little, he would be under heavy shit for this relationship. HE JUST REPAIRED HIS RELATIONSHIP with daughter. Edward just can't win in life at all. |
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 6 . 7/10 So far it seems BELLA is in lust with Edward. And she comes off quite experienced for a 19-20 year old. Well not surprised, Alice is/was a partygirl, and Bella can say Alice makes her go along all she wants but truth is, she probably was the same, except deep down she isn't that person. |
EeWee chapter 17 . 6/25 Enjoyed your story. Love me some Olderward. |
starsmina chapter 17 . 5/6/2019 Thanks for writing I loved it |
JustARead chapter 15 . 4/14/2019 Progress |
JustARead chapter 12 . 4/14/2019 Eek |
JustARead chapter 11 . 4/14/2019 Awww |
JustARead chapter 9 . 4/14/2019 Well |
JustARead chapter 5 . 4/14/2019 Ooooh |
JustARead chapter 4 . 4/14/2019 Wth |
JustARead chapter 2 . 4/14/2019 Uhh |
JustARead chapter 1 . 4/13/2019 Lol |
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 17 . 3/17/2019 Loved this story! I am glad they were able to be together. I'm also glad that it stayed realistic. I didn't think that Alice and Bella would ever make it back to being best friends again. |
Guest chapter 17 . 2/25/2019 I really enjoyed this epilogue, I wondered what happened next for them for awhile after the previous chapter went up. I’m glad it worked out for them. I’m also glad Alice matured a bit. They seem like a really solid couple. |