IT'S 2019. PLS UPDATE. ARE YOU DED. U OK FAM. WHAT HAPPENED?! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.

This was amazing! I laughed so much. I especially like how everyone stayed in character. I hope the baby will grow through a normal growing process instead of skipping it by potion. Well done! Very original and adorable. I hope you have time to post more soon.

No offense or anything, but technically your fanfiction should already be rated m because of the lemon. It's an interesting story though.

When baby stay with Mary, Boris was chase after Pierce! Which upset baby because she didn't like Boris try eat the mouse or see mouse look so scared and sad! (P.S Please update your story soon ️)

Julius is next!

What it was a actually a dream?! Then what about Boris?! Black couldn't have dreamed up Boris watching them... Could he?! No, WOULD he?!

It's a little OOC but ur story is really great! I like ur writing style and I really like the plot too, so keep posting chapters more often please!

Black liking his counterpart... That's actually a bit narcissistic... Loving yourself... ~(• H•)~ WELP

...how big is Ace?

u can answer that in both ways ;3

Ma'am it has been two years

HAHA! I feel bad for Elliot! Poor hare!

Damn, Ace is insane!

Black's foul mouth can be hilarious when he's embarrassed!

You really went all out with Peter being a germ-a-phobe! It's like he says that every two sentences! LOL!

Okay, I really hope Julius will be ready for this. _ may be all grown up now, but she still talks like a baby. She's gonna have a lot to learn now, and so little time to do it in!