Brilliant, brilliant piece you got here. Somehow, your writing style reminds of Chuck Palahniuk! Please take that as a compliment. :)

Wow, this was fabulous! Your writing style is incredibly unique and downright magnificent! Well done! :D

OH. So that happened.
Anyhoo, your way of writing is lovely and the way this flowed was so poetic yet depressing. I likes it!

so Levi died. is the cake made out of someone's blood? please reply I want to know

that was...that was really something(awesome)...the most unique shingeki no kyojin fic that i've ever read..(even if I got goosebumps when you revealed that levi's dead...nice plot twist and great foreshadowing... :)

It's really creepy! Dark very dark fic!

damn. that was... TTATT i love it. ur styl's unque. it almst made me cry