That was great. I like the concept a lot. I like the narrative style. My only, tiny critiques: I would rather have seen "reptilian" than "lizard-like," and Mashiro says, "Berry-tan," not "-chan."

aww... so cute!

I like it, keep going

This was really sweet and everything fitted itself together very nicely. Well done.
:-)

Yes. Yesyesyesyesyes. You have provided something I didn't know I was looking for in this fic. I always wondered about the relationships between the Visoreds and their inner Hollows. This also makes so much sense as training. I mean, what happens once you've beaten your inner Hollow? You can't just put on the mask right away, right? So this is actually very interesting. If you're a Visored aficionado like I am, message me sometime and we could talk about them.