Good

Good good

I'm looking foward to reading more.

I love this pairing! I can't wait to read more.

This is actually a really good fic. There are a few grammar mistakes here and there but not too often. I really like the flashback chapters too.

Your tone of writing is very good also, even when writing about Yu 'wanting to become closer' to Yukiko it didn't come across as too soppy, unrealistic or jarring in any way. Perhaps because you have a good feel for the characters, so that's impressive.

If there was one thing I could mention is maybe creating a bit more tension or 'raising the stakes' in Yu/Yukiko's relationship now, just to test them a bit more. I could be jumping the gun as you are still writing it but you have established them as a nice couple - now is the time to start turning the screws and testing their resolve; but of course, it's your fic not mine, people go for different tones with their fics (some more fluffy than others). Just a suggestion maybe; but whatever you decide to do you will always have a good, and well written fic here. I will follow it.

Till next time

Thank you for another wonderful chapter, I am coming to especially love these flashback/memory chapters - I really enjoy your take of the original scenes and hope you do more as the story proceeds.

Again I hope that IRL is treating you well and thanks for the speedy update from the last chapter. - No real criticisms or opinions with this chapter as it was pretty concise

Take care
Pat

Another great chapter, the relationship between Yu and Yukiko is starting to grow even before the official link begins. Keep up the awesome work. Looking forward to the update.

Hey there, really appreciate you continuing on with this story, still very much enjoying the flow and course the narrative is going. I especially love the learning experience your portraying between Yu and Yukiko as they further explore their relationship and how a deepened bond was formed between Yukiko and Chie.

The chapter was a tad bit short but I understand that your very busy with your family affairs and RL in general (to which I wish you well). Keep up the stellar work and please don't burn yourself out :D.

(P.S. Could you please list out which arcanas Yukiko has established now?)

Dood. I noticed you typing this up during second period and decided to take a look-see for myself and I gotta say, I'm impressed. The pacing in this story is near flawless and giving yukiko the ability of the Wild Card is near ingenious. Big props to you bro, I'm eager to what else you'll give us in the near future

Great chapter, Yukiko's determination and thoughts are good. Looking forward to the update.

Hi there!
May I first say that I absolutely adore this fanfiction, It explores a really neat idea that I would've loved to see. Yukiko and Souji have always been my favourite pairing and to see that their love would even allow them to share power greatly pleases me deep in the heart.

I would like to commend you for your hard work so far, the idea that Yukiko is a wildcard adds a new dynamic to the story and makes her a much more 3D character.

I fear though that her SLink with Adachi may become dangerous as he has preyed on both Saki Konishi and Mayumi Yamano. Although I know Yukiko is a strong person, after resding that part my heart couldn't help but jump a bit ahaha.

Thank you for all your hard work, I hope you continue to make more beautiful chapters and that your RL is good. :)

(PS. The relationship between these two is so fluffy and magical, I love the idea of how their problems melded with one another - Souji always moving around and Yukiko trapped in her families inn)

A nice read so far.
A funny thing about the whole "Big Sis" thing, Nanako actually calls her that in the P4G Drama CDs.

Keep up the good work.

LOL Yukiko imagination XDD

Really liking this one keep it up cant wait to see yukikos reaction to rises flirting with her boyfriend

Another great chapter for this story. Chie's opinions on Yu and Yukiko dating were well done, and the humor at the end was a nice touch. Looking forward to the update, but don't rush. Take as long as you need, it's well worth the wait.