*applauds* Beautifully well written, and very inspired! x

i hope u add one chapter for this.
so interesting.
rukia's, ichigo's, and toshiro's reactions...
so realistic and entertaining

Good story! I kinda wish there was a continuation of it or a sequel though. I like the plot line.

Beautiful writing, on an unhappy subject. Masterfully done.

It's been a while since I've read a story like this that really touches something in me and makes me want to cry and anticipate more at the same time. You've touched on emotions that are truly human and I hope that you continue this story line in some manner for this is really worthy of more than one chapter.
Sincerely, DameM

Bravo. I never sailed this ship, but you're truly an excellent writer. This was sophisticated and realistic, with a perfect ending.