I'm still reading! And really loving it!

Some skillful heat there! A true pleasure to read and receive.

An amazing read, some rare dedication here at taking the time to burn your reader slowly into oblivion! Wow.

Not even past the first few paragraphs and already I'm cringing and rolling my eyes. I don't mean to flame, but this hurts to read:

"Being his only child, Lord Elrond refused any suitors that would ask for his daughters hand, he was holding out for the best suitor he could find and nothing less than his expectations would do, if he had to let her go; his daughter was amazingly beautiful (in his opinion and so no one ever argued) so he had no worries about suitors flocking for her.

Lady Laurena was a young strong willed elf. She was tall, slender but with delicate curves, her skin was like porcelain, she had a roundish face but with cheekbones that were visible, her eyes were a bright sky blue and above them were the longest natural eyelashes , her eyebrows were rounded and elegant, she had a feminine nose and a small full mouth; her makeup highlighted those features. Laurena also had very long beautiful natural red hair that would flow down her back in waves and parted in the middle to shape her face; it also just hit the small of her back and her Elven ears were small and curved into a delicate tip."

Why are there two paragraphs dedicated to talking about how 'beautiful' this OC is? You say three things about Elrond's looks, but the OC gets two paragraphs. Wow. Also, the writing style is super childish in the way you go about describing things.

They lived in an Elvish Land in a Elvish Manor among the finest Elvish things. It's... like... a child story. You do nothing but Tell. You don't Show anything. Writing needs to speak for itself, and yours is not doing that. I can't get past the first few paragraphs, this writing needs some work. The whole paragraph dedicated to your OC's appearance is all one long run-on sentence.

I MISS YOU! PLEASE UPDATE SOON; LOVE YOU!

I love this story!
Hope to read more of it soon!

I love this story! Are you planning to update?

Please Update!

Please update soon! I love this story in of may favorite fanfics!

Please are you ever going to update.

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I hope you continue this story, please update soon

Can i just say how amazing and wonderful this story is! I'm a huge fan of Thranduil and he's absolutely gorgeous. Please continue this story and with a happy ending

Very original and creative

Please continue soon... I keep checking back and was very glad to read that you may continue. The storyline has really captured my interest and I'm eager to learn how things turn out.