| Reviews for Katara's guilt |
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  Guest chapter 3 . 5/26 That was very dramatic |
| Sierra chapter 3 . 6/19/2015 It was sad at first but then it got better I liked it. |
| Terra chapter 3 . 5/5/2015 Sorry its me again but i loved your story so much i have read around 500 fanfics and i loved yours sssssssooooooo much please write more and text me when you do. if you do already text me at 702-370-2044. thank you for making my day. |
| Terra chapter 1 . 5/5/2015 loved it i cant wait to read the next chapter! _ |
| Kataangequalslov chapter 2 . 12/14/2014 "Why don't you give me a brotherly hug" XD For some reason I like Aang occ like that |
 Katheriine chapter 3 . 6/27/2014 I like the concept of exploring that period between the ember players and sozin's commit because I feel like the show doesn't really go into that after-incident embarrassment much. Your story had potential, but I found it a little hard to read because I'm a bit pedantic. There were a lot of mistakes I noticed, like words missing, names misspelt (Sokka) and actions partaken by characters which aren't realistic to their personality (Aang would never do that blame stare to Katara, he isn't one to play the "friendzone" card). I think with a little more editing, planing, and persuasion , your stories will be kick ass :) |
| Tia-Chan18 chapter 3 . 4/15/2014 I enjoyed this chapter. Having Aang rethink his love for Katara after the fight seemed to make sense. I mean, you can't just shrug off something like this. I can see Aang actually doing something like this. This was a nice story overall :) I'm glad you decided to make this into a multi chapter because if it wasn't, it'd be rushed and a bit forced. |
| Tia-Chan18 chapter 2 . 4/15/2014 Nice chapter. Same thing with what I said previously. Try to keep it cleaner so it's easier to read. Also re-read for spelling errors. Best way to do it is to read the story out loud to see if it sounds good. If not, make changes :) |
| Tia-Chan18 chapter 1 . 4/15/2014 I like the start of this . Also, just a bit of a suggestion, try to separate the sections with a break in the middle. It makes it look more clean and easier to read :) |
| KataangloverZutarahater chapter 3 . 3/28/2014 I Love Kataang! |
| Kira97 chapter 3 . 3/15/2014 I really like how the story was developed, just a little correction, it's Avatar "Roku", not "Ruko". It was so cute 3 :'3 |
| Traitor of All Traitors chapter 3 . 3/14/2014 It's okay, but you spelled Roku's name Ruko, a mild error. |
| cojin chapter 2 . 3/10/2014 poor aang. ill wait for update! |
| Kira97 chapter 2 . 3/10/2014 OMG! You really have to continue! You're doing great in this one, I was expecting a happy ending in this chapter but you certainly caught me off guard! I LOVE IT! |
| Kira97 chapter 1 . 3/5/2014 Nice! I'll wait for the next chapter 3 |
