Amazing story

Your ideas are outstanding

Awwwww, that was such a rousing ending. I am SOOO happy I came back and found it. I feel so much better now, more in the 'know'.
You really can tug at my heart strings when you do all that noble kingly stuff. Fili is just so awesome and Kili is right there to support him and I love how they incorporate Skirfir into it all making him feel like one of the family almost.
What a nice ending.

Awww, I love it when Fili and Kili talk to the birds, they do such a good job and take such good care of them.
Fili is trying to entice Kili into going to the blue mountains. I am still torn over this, I want him to go but I don't want him to leave his brother!
Oh, Fili must have really coached Kili on how to deal with the weepy mommy times - or whatever silly name he called it. ha ha. And looks like Kili took his lessons to heart...I think they made a baby!

Well, looks like he can leave the mountain. That is good...and bad.
Fili will miss him terribly.
Nyr is happy for him, but still worried about Durin's day.
Aragon is right, Fili is a singular dwarf, does not covet the gold, willing to give some away to help others. We love our king under the mountain.

OH NO, that bad dream scared a lot of dwarves there, mostly Fili and Nyr!
Loved the whole sword scene, ha ha.
One of Thorin's huh? Nice.

Here we go...no turning back now.

Ha ha ha, Loved Eyown's questions. She really does want to know all about dwarf women, and I am sure she and Nyr would get along great.
Fili and Kili are just so stinking adorable together! Yes, I would guess that Thorin laughs at the both of you a lot, and your mother just rolls her eyes.
And you SOOO have to tell the Fili and An story - you drop such delicious hints and bits that I MUST know the whole story!
Awwww, Kili and Legolas made up!
OH Dear, a test...and then the worry about going to the Blue Mountains to be KING?

OH NO, they are caught, how will they save Kili if they are caught too?

And I can't wait to see if Fili's plan works and Smaug is gone for good!

Awwww, what a nice ending. Yep, I bet they did just go right to bed ...then made babies for the rest of the week. ha ha.

And loved Skirfir's reaction to Beka...but then again, he was eyeing the elf girl too earlier, so he just wants a lass...ANY lass it seems. ha ha. Loved what Fili said about Dwalin gutting him though - so true.

And what was Fjalar's reaction to Beka? Does he like her in a dress too? ha ha.

Well, another one down. How many more are there? I really need to start slowing down, make them last, or soon I will have NOTHING to read! *sniff, sniff*

Excellent story. And I like when you split the brotehrs up, you have exciting things going on at both places, so you are really writing two stories in one. And I do look forward to seeing Bard and Aragorn again...and maybe even Arwen! I would love to see Elledan and Elrohir...they are fun too.

What a nice ceremony, so sweet and everyone got to participate. Even little Gunz.

and now Kili is all married and officially off the market. Yipeeee.
Now...will they go make a baby?

So far so good. and I love the ideas you put in there, as well as the explanation of Dwarf breeding. ha ha.
I enjoy it when a writer throws in her own ideas (or modifies others) to suit her story. Always fun!

OH BOY, a royal wedding! What will I wear? And what do I bring as a gift? Yes, one day is not enough time to figure this all out.

And I bet that Fili told Nama to talk to Nyr and tell her to get on the stick and make an honest dwarf of his brother. ha ha.

Yep, that is exactly what Kili needed...a nice birdbox...an awesome brother, a little bit of nephew and Skirfir time AND some hot monkey love from Nyr. Fixed him right up!

Oh I really HOPE it is over...but, there are a few stories to go yet, so i don't know. But I think if anyone can help, Aragorn can.
Love the brother bond...they are so awesome together!

a very sweet elf named Legolas!

I really enjoy Aragorn being here. I hope he CAN help Kili with the healing hands of a king. maybe if we get him, Fili and even Thranduil working on him as a team something might give.

Corax is funny. Give that bird a nut!