The curse of hatred is contagious.

this. this is absolutely amazing! first (and best) Sharingan Naruto fic I've read so far, and you've made me fall in love with the concept of it. Sasuke's my favourite character lmao he got off'd in such an tearjerker way but loving how he's done justice by carrying on his will onto Naruto and Sakura

you have got to finish this I cried through the whole of the story

has great promise will be wait for update.

This has an excellent idea; the execution is above standard. It's a good story. Solid, to be fair. There aren't many overused words but some fixes should be done in terms of grammar and mechanics (spelling always gets us at least once).

I would like to see quicker development but it's going at a fine pace - one thing I truly enjoy is the essential Team-Seven-centric mentality. It's great.

Good stuff, looking forward to your updates!

Why focus so much on Sakura? It doesn't seem very productive, and I can't exactly call it interesting. I just get bored and end up skipping those parts. Seems like an odd decision considering most people read Naruto for Naruto.

Great story, I started one it's shit in comparison but I helps give a better understand of what it's like to write. I do prefer how Naruto go his eyes it stead of some how being born with them. I'm not sure if you know but in that case I'm pretty sure Naruto would gain the Rinnegan later on because of the Senju and Uchiha DNA mixing, honestly though I think it would be better if you didn't give Naruto the Rinnegan. I would mind naruto getting into a bit of kenjutsu and fuuinjutsu because of his Uzumaki heritage.

Great story though hope to see you continue on:-)

mmmm nice

Feel the villagers hatred is a little more prominent than it should be tbh. The Uchiha were never really loved after the nine-tails attack.

Awesome, the last long Naruto fic with Sharingan seemingly forgot Naruto and Sasukes friendship. I hope you dont.

Sasuke has and always will be Narutos closest bond.

Also hope Sakura stays decent!

Is this a re-uploaded chapter? Anyway, great chapter but try to end your dialogue better. You always forget to end it with a , or .

This wont be pretty for Sai with his mouth this new team wont last long.

I enjoyed Torching Heaven and this is really good too. I'm really liking the pace so far.

I have a few questions

1) Will Naruto and Sakura have their original summons (Toads and Slugs) or will they gain different summons? Maybe even multiple summons?

2) Is Sai actually going to get a summons in this fic or will you keep it completely cannon with his abilities?

3) Is this going to be a Naruto/Sakura pairing in the future? To be honestly I really, really, hope NOT. I just don't really like that pairing at all and I feel there is too much that happened to do plus I am a big, Big, BIG Naruhina fan so I much rather it be that

4) As we know Naruto has a healing factor, whether it is Kyuubi or Uzumaki blood is debatable in my opinion, but I am just wondering if that healing factor might have another quality to it, such as adapting the sharingans in Naruto's eyes in a way that makes it like they really belong in him.

Now that the questions ended let's move on to comments

I am actually glad you brought up the shadow clones abilities and potential with it because when you think about it one of the sharingan's weakness is that while it can copy ninjutsu it would still take time for someone to be able to fully master said jutsu, at least that is my view. However, Naruto's shadow clones actually cut that problem out because he can use the shadow clones in a way that helps him master the ninjutsus during his spare time.

Another thing, I understand why you went with Kakashi training Naruto but I can't help but think that after such an incident this is something that Hiruzen would also want to take a personal interest in training Naruto. To be honest I don't really understand why he didn't train Naruto when he was younger.

I also feel the need to mention this but I think that Naruto could also gain training from Tsunade in the future. Think about it, Tsunade is the granddaughter of not only Hashirama but also the first Jinchuuruki Mito Uzumaki. Both the Uzumaki clans and the Senju clans were said to have large chakra pools as well which means that even as a child Tsunade would have probably had massive chakra pools. Yet Tsunade was able to become one of the worlds greatest medic ninjas. With all this in mind, she would be a great mentor when it comes to training Naruto in chakra control later on. Even if Naruto won't have the amount of control needed for medical ninjutsu (that could be a personal choice for you to decide)