A lot of this felt unnecessarily drawn-out and overly dramatic, almost soapy, but on the whole it's a pretty good story. Character motivations were unclear and hard to understand. I admit that I kind of started skipping bits and skimming ahead, and it didn't seem like we ever found out who the real mole was. Anyway, thanks for taking the time to share this, and good luck with your future writing!

This has got to be one if not the best story I've ever had the pleasure to read. Thank you for writing such a beautiful piece of art.

Huh, the General was innocent.

The "love experts" strike again.

This was absolutely amazing and beautiful. Thank you

zippleback? what about the second head?

I'd never heard of a Hiccup/Elsa ship so when i found this i was most surprised as i enjoyed all the HTTYD movies and both Frozen movies too. I absolutely loved this story from start to finish expertly crafted and brilliantly written, a thouroughly fantastic adventure about some of my favourite characters, you clearly have a talent for writing and i hope that it serves you well in the future. I enjoyed it so much i cant help but hold out hope that one day you will perhaps write a sequel, as it is this is going in my favourites so i can read it agian in the you for taking the time to write this.

Fantastic story I’ve come back to after so long. I found this one close to it’s beginning, caught up with it halfway through and now am finally finishing it. A phenomenal read start to finish, and a real journey for me personally.

Great story so far. I am fond of the little intrigate day to day happenings you litter the inbetweens with. It comes across as grounded to medieval times.

The romance plot is stewing nicely. The little glimpses, the blushes, the rationalizations and how Elsa gets ever more creative at explaining it away. But she never truly stops being the Queen at any moment, which made the banquet so gratifying as we saw the pairing having some meat on it. The polite facade works great as it gives impact when it's gone.

Of course I should have expected that an obstacle would not be far away, which is another thing I like. They are many and varied. Their duties, Elsa's trauma, the notebook incident that made Toothless vary of her, and others. Their dynamic is fluid but there's a lot to explore yet.

One thing, their talk is rather formal and particular articulate. It makes sense for Elsa, but I catch myself wondering how Hiccup comes across very courtly at times. Something to consider.

Damn, that was intense.
A flame that’s alive.. hmm.

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Have you ever thought about writing a sequel? I think Frozen 2 actually work very well to create a reunion between Hiccup and Elsa.

I’m sad that it’s over but happy non the less!

It was an amazing story! An emotional roller coaster! There are so many thought going through my head from beginning to end. Completely beautiful! I’m glad I found a story on this ship a very well written and thought out story at that! Especially since there aren’t many out there, but none the less lovely! Lost sleep for this story as I couldn’t wait to see what was going to happen next whether this or that was going to happen! It was really amazing and your way of writing is really good. It can truly be seen that you really put out so much effort and hard work into this story. I applaud you author! I hope you continue to write for many other things! I loved the story and so did many others! You brought tears to my eye (you really did no joke) It had a lovely ending, but none the less had my mind reeling with possibilities of what could have been? what will happen? what’s going to happen next? And yes they will meet again! But what would happen when they do? Ah truly had me on the edge of my seat and still does as I keep rethinking everything that happened in this story! It was great I really loved! Thank you for your hard work!

Is there no room for an epilogue? Christ, I know the ending is good, but you're killing me here with all the possibilities running in my head. Thanks for the read nonetheless! Enjoyed it enough to read all of it in a day.