Reviews for Lockdown, Gunned Down |
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MoonlightSharpee chapter 1 . 10/28/2014 Talk about a fast paced relationship...lol This story was amazing can't wait to read more of your fan fics. |
Princess Shoshana chapter 9 . 6/30/2014 Good story, keep it up. :) I just want to suggest being careful with your pronouns. Having only guys in the story, saying "he" and "him" too often can make things confusing for the reader. In my opinion, it's better to overuse the names a bit than to overuse the pronouns. At least then everybody is on the same page. Again, really enjoying this! |
error404-known chapter 12 . 6/5/2014 oh poor blaine ;-; kudos to him for trying but they both knew it was a bad idea and it was way too soon! but in the long run they are boyfriends :D yay |
error404-known chapter 13 . 6/5/2014 evil. psycho. parents. really good story i enjoyed reading it and glad no one died T.T :) |
Blainemuilove chapter 13 . 5/31/2014 D': im gonna miss this story |
EveryKurtHasHisSam chapter 13 . 5/31/2014 Oh I just love this ending! Amazing job! I hope there's more from you soon, your writing is amazing! |
Blainemuilove chapter 12 . 5/31/2014 FINALLY it happened but nooo :( |
EveryKurtHasHisSam chapter 12 . 5/30/2014 I love this. I'm sad it's ending tomorrow though! :( |
EveryKurtHasHisSam chapter 11 . 5/30/2014 Ah, this is too adorable! |
EveryKurtHasHisSam chapter 10 . 5/30/2014 They are so cute! |
EveryKurtHasHisSam chapter 9 . 5/30/2014 Thank god they're both safe. Wow. |
EveryKurtHasHisSam chapter 8 . 5/30/2014 Ah, this is killing me. This is just so good. |
EveryKurtHasHisSam chapter 7 . 5/30/2014 Oh my god. Is he dead? Or just unconscious. No I'm not prepared to read on, but I know I need to. |
EveryKurtHasHisSam chapter 6 . 5/30/2014 I'm hooked. This is brilliant! Poor Blainey... |
EveryKurtHasHisSam chapter 5 . 5/30/2014 Aww they finally kissed! But I'm still scared! :( |