ok for any reviews asking about yoki it is the energy of yokai just like chakra but more potent also for the author when is the next update coming or have you given up

I am confused what's yoki? I know of yokai but not this yoki

Was going great and enjoying it until you KILLED Naruto. At which you lost all my interest. Still finished it with big fat DISLIKE.

Well nice chapter seems things are getting interesting anyways keep up the great work!

Please someone comeback and update this story it is so good I really am enjoying this naruto and want to see more interactions between naruto his sisters and the kyubi

I really hope you continue this story.

Nice to know that's going to be forever a mystery as to who that was.

Never liked "parents living" stories... for one of a few reasons... 1. the third is COMPLETELY evil (and thus SHOULD never be forgiven), 2. the PARENTS are evil (thus are dead meat). 3. The parents are complete IDIOTS (see number one). which they are supposed to be geniuses off the hook... and number 4. If naruto NEVER suffered then how does anyone justify him getting powers?... They NEED to be DEAD...even a story of kushina alive makes no sense because, she would go against EVERYTHING she was raised to believe (and isn't that the whole thing of why naruto has no friends? Because in this mythic world, they ALWAYS follow what their parents say?)

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Boooring.

Why exactly do they think this is Naruto? In one night he grew, changed hair color, his choice of clothes changed, his entire personality changed, the fact that they can not sense his chakra anymore, ... he should be in the interrogating department answering questions -_-*

Well, the Mizuki Genin test situation was boring and 100% canon, could have left it out.

Narutos family was alive, on the run but presumed dead? Unlikely, but I read worse.

Naruto exploded and returned with a altered apearence? Unreasonable... but it got me curious. So I will continue reading even if it is not one of the best... but thanks for writing and posting.

that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming