You really shouldn't have added that last part, having your audience realize your forcing events is rarely a good idea, at the very least an illusion of naturalness is required. It also happens to make your characters seem week or inconsistent with their power level if they're meant to be powerful.

wonderful story ! thank you very much, when do you intend to publish the next chapter?

"He hoped he didn't have to deal with tentacles or something"
Amphibian: ?

please don't encourage binding and physical activity. its really dangerous. binding is totally valid- but if youre working out, s not good

Why didn’t Ben use clockwork to revive Asia?

i like the concept you did for this OG chapter, but everything moved along too fast. also, from what i read nobody was all that surprised to see aliens that weren't omnitrix transformations. however, i can't read this anymore... till you remake the entire fanfic at some point.

Cool, but I have to know one thing, who’s Sakura?

at full power way big can blow up a planet the size of Pluto and Ultimate Way Big is even stronger, if Atomix is stronger than a mountain would be easy

didn't they make a joke like that in either ultimate alien or alien force, where they say it takes place a few years later and the main guy teams up with an old enemy?

to be honest I prefer the dubbed anime's name for it I find it hilarious "Dragon boy Z"

This chapter is just exposition as ben casually talks about his situation as everyone sucks his dick as they say he is "god level"

So the whole deal could have been avoided if Odin hadn’t been a ignorant cunt. And I feel he should have let Ben have the free shot. It’s the least he could have done.

Hmm.

Where did your cover image come from?

I hate, hate, hate, Hate how they redesigned Gwen. In fact, I hate a lot of the animation of omniverse. I much prefer Alien Force and Ultimate Alien.

I'd like to see how you would write a female anodite Ben in the DxD universe.