BITCH NO! MAKE MORE I TELL YOU! MAKE MOOOOOOORE!

BITCH FUCKING NO! MAKE MORE I TELL YOU! MAKE MOOOOOORE

That was soooo adorable!
Trust Levi to be so cliché!
Amazing cute stuff, the fanfic I've been looking for ll this time! I practically binge read the whole thing in an hour.
Loving this! Hope you find the time to update!
-Aura

Because the level of freakiness was too overwhelming a round two had to be done eh? Lol
This was a very romantic and loving chapter i enjoyed it i am just speecless. Miss Zara you are certainly adding ripples to the calm waters or your writing style because now i am seeing a new yet interesting form of style in your writing. I like this chapter though however the effect of the chap before this is still lingering.

Oh my god...this is very nerve wracking you killed freaking PETRA! how could you! Omg please pardon me while i zip up my black dress and shit i have to go to the funeral of the BEST CHARACTERS EVVVVVVVVVERRRRRRRR!. i literally cried at the scene where tony told her like eyes waterey and stuff (tears never fell thought i pulled out like a boss)buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut tht part had me weak af i am so upset at Levi too, i wanna take off my headphone chord wrap it around his neck hook it to my window pane notch and toss him on the opposite side and watch him choke/be hanged to death caz like how dare you Levi Rivalle/ Ackerman whatever Rivalerman last name you want- how dare you make tali cry! I shall persecute you and your sexiness i am very upset this chapter gave me so much mix feelings but i mean so many writers can't capture the level of effectiveness that is required in their writing to move their readers and for you to capture these feelings through me and i'm sure other readers too i think it proves how splendid you are as a writer i hope you aspire to pursue something in this career and not let this talent go to waste. This was a short yet lovely chapter one i think i will always remember

loved it

AMAZZZZZZIIIIIINNNNNG i can't believe im so far back holy shit im freaking 4 chaps away i need to continue but its 12 in the morning for me i shall complete the remaining chapters!
This was amazing!

Ps. Levi's real last name is Ackerman?

AWWWWWWW LEVI :3 So cuteee! Even he has a heart,
Keep is coming :) :D I luv it!

Ahh I am loving this first chapter :D Cannot wait to get to the end!
Be sure to keep the chapters coming gurl!

Great work! i was wanting more last time and you delivered and this time it got a bit heated. Damn Levi is a lucky man. Your writing is smooth, though there are some words there that make me think abit. I suppose when you type so fast you use the wrong word.. NO MATTER IT WAS STILL GREAT. can't wait to read more :D

I must say I love Attack on Titan, anime and manga but not so much Fanfictions since people kind of... don't really try unless it is Yaoi OoO
But this is really good I LOVE don't give up! I wanna read more!
Tali is an amazing Oc and decides the love she gets! I cannot believe Levi was training people OoO I seriously thought he was doing like black market stuff! I wanna read more TT please continue!

Looking good, like all the chapters i have read so far i got into it and wanted more, when i hit the end of this chapter i kept scrolling, and scrolling and scrolling until my web browser finally went "Nah, non left". You keep the characters really centred and their personalities don't deviate from the show/ manga or in Tali and her families case, how you originally described them. The flow is good too and the story is just gripping, i wanna know more.

10/10 will read more!

I literally couldn't stop reading... I started this morning and couldn't stop I had to read more and just finished XD I look forward to reading more and hopefully soon! Keep up the good work! :)

I kind of want to make a suggestion for breaking the news of tali being the author. E_: n the beginning of the book a, say all of their names and something about them. Ex: too Petra for always being pretty and adorable. Too Erwin, for being an awesome God king. Etc.

Omg omgomgomgomgomg! I'm all hyped up! Really good chapter! What'll happen next.

Amaziiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnng
This chapter was worth the wait but now im so anxious to see what will happen next she is being targetted she is getting insecure and damn...this story is getting awfully interesting. Hurry and write the next chapppp