Please update. I absolutely am in love with the first chapter

Hope you write more

really enjoyed this first chapter. Glad that you showed emma as both a physical and verbal fighter. sad that henry got hurt, but glad the emma is trying to protect him. can't wait for emma and regina to meet. please update soon!

Oh man please dont give up this story. PLEASE. YOU NEED TO UPDTE.

Please update! I like your story so far, and I want to see more.

I love your characterization of teen Emma! Yeah you hurt her but she'll be okay later :) I am wondering what ships may happen also

Wow. . . this is a really interesting concept. I love how you managed to keep both Henry and Emma in character even with the age adjustment. Like you said, I'm really excited for when young!Emma and Regina finally meet. Please keep going with this story, and I hope to see an update soon!

Question: id this going to eventually turn into swanqueen? Not that I wouldn't read it if it didn't, I'm just curious.

Really excited 4 this

I'm ok if you hurt Emma as long as you're gonna heal her again :) Really really like it so far and it's really catchy. I like it that Henry is Emma's forster brother and she cares for him a lot. My favorite pairing is Emma and Neal so you started really good in your first chapter and I hope that the person who said Emma is also Neal ;) Pleas update really soon!

I love the Henry/Emma sibling relationship. I wonder how shell end up in story brooke.

I love this story! You have to continue

I'm intrigued, please continue!