are you ever gonna finish any of your stories

Bella has such a large tight knit support group around her, they're right though, she's gotta eat and keep up her strength

love your story!

So good! Please continue!

I love the fact that you are doing this in the memory of your friend and feel terrible about her death, however, I would advise you actually use paragraphs when writing. This would allow people to read it and would get her life out to more people. At the moment I'm not even going to attempt this as it is thousands of words in one hit with no structure at all. I hope you fix this so that people are actually able read it.

All the best, Kathy

Please update soon.

Seriously, so they basically kept their secret from her. But couldn't let her decide on her own when to tell people about her cancer. That's fucked up, excuse my language but it is. Can't wait to read more though, lol.

Wow. That is so heartbreaking I know what it is like to be worried about someone with cancer. Plz update soon I would love to see how bella fares with the cancer and what happens with embry.

Wow I'm addicted to the story please update soon wonder if her and embry will be together hmmmm