What! This thing doesn't continue! This is sooooooooo good. You should totally continue. If you come home late, take little steps to continue this story, a paragraph here, a sentence there. You can do it over a course of time. This is a really good story. Keep it up!

Update soon i love who this fanfiction is turning into

Fantastic. Please continue thus marvellous tale beach's to am now fully addicted. It's amazing.

Please update I know you probably get this a lot but I love reading this I understand if you don’t want to
Love kitty~

Oh my gosh! Your the person that wrote this?! I had read it on another website a while ago, and I loved it! Great job!

UPDATE! This story is amazing and you need to update it! please! I need you to update! I need to find out what happens! What about Lloyd! PLEASE UPDATE! I BEG YOU! I don't know what else to say! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE!

Don't stop plz continue

UPDATE THE STORY!

Very detailed. It causes the reader very vivid/accurate images in their head. Hope Lloyd can be healed. Like a spell or something... Oh I dunno! But anyways, good job.

Please update! You r writing a very good story an I want to know how it ends. I know it was over a year ago that I last updated but this really good and I need to find out what happens to lloyd. Please update. I would really love that. Please.

I know the last time u updated this story was like over a year ago you really need to u

Oh my, listen to me, women/man, I am commanding you to finish your story! I know it's been awhile since you updated and I told myself not to read an unfinished story but I didn't listen to myself and here I am. I must know what happens, especially with that awful cliffhanger! Please update!

I think an adapting to life story sounds interesting.

Oh no! I can't wait to see where you are going with this story.

I don't know how you would make the next chapter better because this one was great! It had very good detail and it was thrilling.