Oh my god...

D;

This is the saddest Four swords story I've ever come across. But it beautiful at the very same time. You made me cry my heart out. ;w;

I... Whoa.

Seriously, this is REALLY good, but just so depressing.

I literally spent an entire day mulling over what might have happened if Vio had died last (though it makes sense that he died first) and how it would have been SO MUCH WORSE if Red had died after Blue (because it probably would have broken the poor kid) and I kinda overthought the whole thing.

Beautiful writing though... as usual.

IM NOT CRYING IM SWEATING THROUGH MY EYEBALLS!

Sad story but I saw what you did there with BEN drowned quote 0-0

That...is the saddest thing...I have ever read...it might even be sadder than the things I can write. *sniff* I was so close to tears when I read this, and I hardly ever cry when I'm reading stuff so this...this is really good. I think it was really good. Can...can you maybe make an alternate ending? Just a suggestion, and even I'm not too good with happy endings, but...again that was REALLY good. ;w;

O.O that's it?!...sniff...now I want to cry T.T so sad, but so beautifully written.
I'm glad you finished it. It's a wonderful story. :)

...Wait. Is this seriously the end? D: I think I might cry...

(Also, I caught your BEN reference at the end. :3 At least I think it was a BEN reference.)

I swear that if this isn't continued I will cry.
But anyway, I love it.

Wooow! :D This story is great. This focussed on something I'd never thought of. I never guessed that they would've died when the sword was out back... Huh! Looking forward to more! * follows* :)

Very interesting and nicely written. I never really thought about what would happen after they became one. And the part with red and blue was so sweet :3 it made me want to cry too. Please continue this, I look foreword to more!

Very intriguing, I always wandered what would truly happen when they became one. Great story and I will definitely be lookin out for updates on this one. keep up the good story telling :P
-Doctor Zelda