Awwww! So cute!

J'adore quand on plonge dans le quotidien des personnages, leurs petits instants de vie, et j'adore les cheveux, donc ça ne pouvait que me plaire.
J'aime beaucoup comme ton OS inspire la tendresse et l'amour, à travers des petits gestes (les caresses dans les cheveux), une ambiance, sans avoir besoin de baisers, de grandes déclarations.
C'était beau tout plein ! J'aurais tout à fait vu cette scène dans le film, sans problème.

that was adorable. i must confess i cannot see howl accepting such crazy coloring without a temper tantrum along the way, but the story and your characters are irresistible and i couldn't help but smile widely when i read this :)

Aawwwww
xD

Hahaha. This was really good!

The word is "fragrance," not flagrance. To be flagrant is to be shameless, brazen, or to show a lack of concern or respect. To be fragrant means to smell nice. :) Important not to mix those word up. Best of luck in future writing!

And Howl tries it any way and Sophie just rolls her eyes

Very cute! I think it's a very sweet little look on their life after the film. You did great and I didn't see too many errors. For not being a native English speaker you did extremely well!

I don't know why but the moment I read that Howl had green hair my thoughts immediately thought of Haku from Spirited Away.

lol so cute

Lol, Howl, you can be an idiot at times! Super cute fic!
-Caso

Cute story!

XD I liked this one-shot, it was cute! :3

Aww, so sweet!