Reviews for Harry Potter and the Elemental Tale |
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DontMindMe chapter 6 . 8/6 Very interesting story, While i would continue to read normally even though it has been abandoned this chapter seemed like a good point to stop with no real cliff hangers and teasing interactions. Like how i have said before it is a shame you seem to not want to finish the stories you start as whe ones i am reading (and i will comment in them) are well written with interesting plots. Is your writing and stories perfect? No but if it was then i would have expected the rest of the stories as you would have finshed them then gone back over them like a published author dues when sending a book to print. That said they are very well written for a fanfic that is written and realiset in chapters. I do hope you come back and finish this and your other stories as they are plots i have not or rarely see as well as some of your crossovers are ones i like and offend have few stories in worth reading. Your new reader. DMM |
Yuuki-Raijin chapter 15 . 7/21 Will this fic ever be continued? |
Raymondjay41 chapter 15 . 7/17 This is one story I hope gets finished, truly original content! So many storylines |
HarmoniousAge chapter 15 . 9/19/2019 Love the story, I hope you come back to this sometime it has great potential, which actually surprised me as I wasn't sure coming into it. Absolutely love your Astoria btw, it's hard to find anything where she has any prominent role, least of all, a romantic one, and the ones that do are usually incomplete. I'm actually thinking of giving her a bigger role now in the fic I'm writing myself. Thanks for the read. Please update soon. |
martin.presston.9 chapter 13 . 9/18/2019 answering your AN a bit more action from harry would be good at some point |
Bronze chapter 1 . 8/17/2019 I started to read this once before but somehow my computer lost it. Now, I really liked what I'd read and hopefully this time I'll get to finish what you've posted. That also means I'd very like to see where you take this. |
rb2312 chapter 3 . 6/8/2019 Like the chat with the snake Wonder what's in salazzars office |
rb2312 chapter 2 . 6/8/2019 Nice trip to the chamber. Actually suprised that no one aske him to take them there in cannon, given the hisorical sugnificance of the place. nice cliffy |
rb2312 chapter 1 . 6/8/2019 Nice start. Can just see daphne looking like elsa in slytherin robes. or al least a family resemblence. Can not wait to see what favours daphne is after |
Sonia25 chapter 14 . 4/30/2019 It's not about picking the guy daphne loves is not easy , it is about playing games with people's emotion and whether u want it or not daphne is doing the same with harry which makes her character hateable and I don't like such character because it is not only about her choice but it is about harry too or have u forgotten about it? Btw the ff is definitely not as good it first loked like |
CamTheThief chapter 13 . 12/30/2018 /Sigh... I am never fond of overly dense characters. I'm not saying Harry should be a cassanova or anything but man... it ceases to become an amusing "will they/won't they" dynamic between characters that like each other when literally all parties in the story are aware of their feelings aside from the main character himself. Small chuckles at clueless teenage antics quickly become exaggerated eye rolls when authors insist on making them too prevalent. |
jbfritz chapter 15 . 9/5/2018 Great story! Please post more soon! |
Kalladin1989 chapter 15 . 7/19/2018 This is a great story. I hope you are able to update soon |
MajorChaos13 chapter 15 . 6/22/2018 Interesting to say the least. Hoping to get more soon |
Myllinu chapter 15 . 6/3/2018 Great story! I wonder if Ginny was supposed to go to slytherin but convinced the hat to put her in gryfindor to be closer to Harry? |