Sweet :-)

Cute story xx

I love your story!

Beautifully done. Absolutely loved it :)

INCRAMAZNG. (Incredible/amazing - I couldn't choose). I teared up at this haha! Absolutely wonderful.

Sweet

Just the right mix of angst and fluff, and again, nice job on another first. You handled the steamy stuff quite well. Really loved the toast to Sara at the end there too ;)

Gah!

Got me all watery-eyed there at the end!
Another great one!

(And yes, the lemon moment wasn't the absolute perfect it could have been, but I don't think anyone who writes moments like those aren't exactly comfortable with how they turn out no matter what.)

But I adored this, truly. Because honestly I think a part of Felicity does see Oliver that way, and vise versa for him. They may not admit it, but it's there. Their dynamic works so well because Oliver doesn't have the history with Felicity that he has with Sara or Laurel or almost anyone else. She never calls him Ollie like the Lance sisters do, or like Thea does. She never knew him that way, and I don't think she would have liked the old "Ollie" at all.
She also wouldn't have put up with his crap then either.. Haha. :)

Anyways, I'm off my theory tangent now.. This was covered in lovely, sweet, awesome sauce.
Can't wait for more from you!

Oh my gosh! this could not have been your first smut fic, it was so good!

Very nice!

That was beautiful...well done!

Wow, that was fantastic. Great job.

This is just so lovely. You have a great writing style and the idea and execution were perfect. Thanks!

Loved this!

Loved it.