I think it's good writing but I'm more into the brother relationship between oliver and roy.

You really got my heart racing there. But why stop?
I can see by the date that it’s been a long time, but damn. This is to good not to continue.

I think your story is amazing and hope you keep writing it. I so ship roy and oliver maybe a little to much

Please don't abandon this story!

Omg i love Oliver and Roy i ship it , a enjoyable fanfiction

Please keep writing. There isn't enough of this pairing, really want to read more.

This is a good story and like the only Oliver/Roy story I have found. Are you planing on continuing it it or not?

Wau. This is so interesting. I love this story.

I like the interaction between them I recan Roy has more cemastry with Oliver,then he does with the females on the show.I realy like this story.

Everyone Karisjoa has lost her account and made a new one as Karisjoa2. She uploaded and is continuing to update this story there. It's under the same name and everything so just continue to read the story there.

Outstanding! Please write more!

Love it, can't wait to see if Oliver loses a hand :3

Please update soon, I'm eager to find out if Roy gets to Oliver in time.

I love this story! :) Thanks for writing it, there needs to be more Roy/Oliver in the world.

Great story! I really hope you continue it. You have a great writing style and your characterization of Roy and Oliver (and the other characters) is really good.