Damn Yang... you scary. Don’t go Deadpool breaking 4th wall on me.

Oh my god Yang, you're killing me here with how utterly smooth you can be-

You're seriously awesome! One of my most fave fic! Ur a genius! XD

Very smooth, Yang.

I loved this! Short and sweet is sometimes best.

Oooo, really loved those 'first chapter/one-shot' lines. Very clever :D

So when I read the name of this I thought "You named your story Oneshot? Dayum. That is some lazy right there. Ah well, may as well give it a shot." And then I read the story and realized that you named your story after a visible crack in the fourth wall. That. Is. Awesome!

Such fluff, much good! Very wow! I think that about sums up my thoughts.

Cool story bro, write on!

Did you purposefully break the fourth wall with "And this is a one-shot."?

A literal one-shot in a one-shot? I'm impressed, keep it up :D

*Incoherent noises of adoration*
Yeah, that actually sums up my review. I really adore Bumblebee and you write it so damn well. Besides, fluff like this is really good at the moment.

haaa, i get it. This story's a one-shot, but Yang said it's not a one shot. Word play :P

A lot of this story is close to our heart as writers! I like the use of and meaning behind one-shot, chapters in a book and such. :) Your last two chapters made me realise that Blake is cloest to us irl in the sense that she loves reading, and possibly writing. And all of us must love to read and write (or we wouldnt be on this site to begin with!).

Blake is sometimes insecure, and a closed in person, but its also because of her past. Reading and writing is probably a big outlet for her. And I can relate to that in that sense because if I am writing on something I like, its fun and a big outlet too!

It hard to show true appreciation for it though, unless ... Yang, Ruby or Weiss suddenly develops a penchant to draw beautifully so that they can add wonder pictures to Blake's writing. :)

Anyway, I like this side of Blake that you have portrayed! She would be more insecure given her past, and would need a partner with a great deal of patience and gentleness before she truely opens up to her.

This is actually a FANTASTIC concept. I freaking love it to death.

AAAGH, the feels! There's feels, but there's also that not-so-oblivious humor about the format of this story ABOUT the story! Agh,you clever girl.

Awwww, that was so sweet. And nice pun, since she said one shot and that was a one-shot y'know.