Really good

This is an interesting story, I can hardly wait to see more in the future.

shame this is dead

Wheres the next one

I love this story and while reading it and hearing about the howl genjutsu I thought of another jutsu that could be called the great howl or something wear the skulk form a circle and gather chakra. The chakra is passed through the circle to amplify it and they are all connected through their chakra. They take a deep breadth and howl. If you've ever seen bolt. It’s like the super bark and destruction spreads out on all sides with at a very large range. The only safe spot is inside the circle where they could have allies. It’s takes a few seconds to gather up enough chakra for the howl and the larger the circle (number of allies In The circle) the longer it takes. It also completely drains them of chakra and leaves them painting but the jutsu reaches all sides, is very powerful, and hits everywhere. They can also still fight but they will have to use taijutsu and that’s after they catch their breaths. The jutsu hits The sky, the ground, and even water if it’s there. It is also more powerful with more people but I think it should only be done if everyone from the skulk is there. It’s a super powerful jutsu but that means it has to have limits like a last resort. It will cause at least as much if not more destruction than pain’s planet jutsu.

God I love this fic. You got no idea man. I lost sight of it awhile ago and only just found it again today,Love it.

There's no questioning or mwntioning of what happend to that vixen. In fact there's not even an encounter after she disapears, it doesn't even say if she went to confront the ninja again or what.

On the off chance that you read this , this story is great especially your teamwork ideas . Please continue this story at one point in time.

Nice!

update

Aww sooo sure and I love the animalistic wualities

please continue i really enjoyed this

Dude, seriously. Dressing and skinning in his apartment? I know his building is abandoned, but even then no one normal would want few liters of blood and guts lying around. He should do this in the woods.

Um, just want to let you know, it's Ninshu, not Ninjutsu- that came after. I know that this story isn't cannon, and you have a right to your own story line, but Ninshu was Hagoromo's (the Sage's actual name just in case you didn't know) teaching of understanding and way to bond through Chakra, creating peace. Hagoromo doesn't like Ninjutsu as it is a weapon used to create war and kill, and gets upset when it is confused with Ninshu. If you continue this story and mention the information about the Feral Jutsu, you might want to change that little bit just to take Sennin-Sama's views and true beliefs into consideration.

Wow, great Cliffhanger, keep up the work, and where did you go?