This version of Blake makes me laugh so hard- I love Ruby's innocence xD

This was cute. Would be fun to see Ruby's reaction to Blake's "other" stories. I imagine a great deal of surprise.

This was adorable. Thank you.

I love this

*passes out from adorableness* *wakes up after 4 hours* *looks at clock* *looks at screen* WOAH! Is part 2 gonna make me pass out too? I LOVE IT! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! She loves dem cat ears! I'd look at her tumblr, but F**KING PICTURES WON'T LOAD! Help me :'(

Heya, I read a lot of stories. Absolutely tons. Wish I could explain how many, or tell you flat-out, but I can't. No way to know, right?
Well, even though I read tons, I don't review a lot. I like to make it good when I do review, so there's a point to it. I always review in the same way: cons first, then pros, followed by my own personal comments that usually include the both, but without the cold feeling. Anyways, sorry if the long review is a bother.

Cons:
-The story has a lot of potential, y'know. Sad it's a oneshot.
-There are too few cons for this story.
Pros:
-The story is well thought-out, and that's especially important for a oneshot. Really good job.
-Interactions between the characters is good.
-The story made me all happy inside.
-Tons of potential! Could make wonderful stress-relief writing.

Personal:
Alright, alright. Sorry about all that. I normally don't like Ladybug stories because I'm pretty big on the most common ships, being White Rose and Bumblebee (in case you didn't know), but this story did a good job of it. I actually enjoyed it. Now, I'm a very serious person, especially when it comes to writing, so a story that makes me smile and be happy and everything is a very good thing. You succeeded in that remark. My only personal tick with it is the AU part, because I'm a big fan of the actual RWBY world of Remnant, but that's irrelevant seeing as the story does a wonderful job of presenting itself in a manner that makes the AU part enjoyable. I would love to see more of this story, but it IS a oneshot and I understand that. Even so, I'm making a point to follow it just in case you get bored and write or something.

Thanks for the story,
-Kyle

This has an interesting storyline to it. You should do more chapters with this story since the last sentence says "Until next time."

Sequel please. this is TOO CUTEE! ahhh i love this like crazy.

This story is soo cute. I like it

I just realised that one of the characters is a writer so you're a writer writing about a writer writing. Hilarious :)

So adorable!

Ladybugggg! Yay!

This is fantastic! The only thing I can say against it is my dislike of Yang lacking a bike. But who actually cares, this is a really good story.

I love the little bits subtextual humor in sprinkled throughout, and the AU is nice and approachable; I'd love to see more of it.

A very cute story and it's nice to see more Black Rose on the site. Good work, thanks for sharing.