No please don't stop I wanna know mooooorre! SO GOOD!

This is hilarious! I can't wait for the next chapter :D

You're insane. .
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lol So funny.

Woo Hoo! I made a review

I finally caught up! Now to the review.
This chapter wasn't bad at all, I found it very How do i say it...Kind of hot..Like really hot.
If any thing i might hug you to death,Cause your brilliant Sir.

I seriously love this story and i hope you'll also stay with the story to!

So I'll start with the first chapter, I do suggest that you go over it at least one more time to find any misspellings, And make sure its on the set course you want the story to be going in.(Of course if you have the time)

And for the second chapter,I thought the past view was very in character which was really cute and enjoyable,I think you nailed it there.I honestly didn't think this chapter was OOC a lot, So i really enjoyed this! I did think the "You 'Shall' pay with you body" was a bit OOC but it was funny and what Oga would most likely say.

And the fluff in this story is so perfect its hard to describe how adorable it is,I think you should keep the fluff to a average height, And not lose they're character, But since Furuichi and Oga now more of an Animal/Human, It's understandable that they might loose character time to time.

That's my review of both chapters i do hope that it helps in some way!(And understandable)