This was pretty cool. You controlled the vibe well. Tense and dangerous in the beginning (despite nothing actually happening) and mellow and chill towards the end. It was a nice read. I like your portrayal of the characters. I don’t know them too well, but they seemed legit to me.

Thanks for sharing.

How could it feel real she can't not smell like the person she shift into and Logan would not be about to get past not smelling what she smell like anyways.

Beautiful.

That's really a nice story！I am a fan who come from China，can I translate this story into Chinese，so that more fans can read this story？Thank you！Looking forward to your reply.

This is so great! I love Raven/Logan. They really deserve happy ending.

was not expecting that. really good.

Wow Awesome love it

I loved this story. It showed the simpler side of Logan, the side we often forget. Thanks for a glimpse inside.

Son of a... I actually, no joke, cried at the end of this... Gods damn it your good...

Great little story here. Very well written and paced. Interesting and creative idea too. Great job!

Wow. Surely not what I expected... instead, it was WAY better! Thank you!

This was very sweet and haunting

This was a great story! And a very interesting take on the relationship - a relationship which doesn't seem to get enough fan fiction time! Honestly, all your stories seem to pick this up and it pleases me. :D

Yep, Mystique is the master of deception, she can even fool Logan since she nows him so well and he wants to be fooled.

Yeah, Logan and Jean are a pretty complicated matter. I always had the impression that Logan's love for Jean had a lot to do with redemption. Jean had always the image of the perfect girl next door. If Logan could make her fall for him, then in his mind that is a sign that there is still hope for him left. That actually fits into your story. Sex is just as secondary thing in regard of the bigger picture. The reason why Logan introduces Jean/Raven to that side of his.

I think Mystique also learned a lot about Logan and I think she will never look at him the same way she did ever again. You could basically feel the new-forged connection.

As always, great job!
Jeanniebird