Personally, I don’t trust Mrs. Morse! And I’m not sure if you want to hear this or not, but you have a few Britishisms in the story that don’t make sense when an American character says them. Like Coulson saying that FitzSimmons caused “thousands of pounds of damage” in this chapter, and someone calling the party a “fancy dress” party. An American would call it a costume party. Just though I’d share that. Thanks for sharing!

This just inspired me to watch a bunch of clips from Mulan, for which I must thank you! I love Mulan, and Shang was definitely the hottest male Disney character, IMHO!

This was great! I was nervous, but I’m happy with the ending!

Is there a particular reason why you have all of the dialogue in italics? It’s a little distracting. Thanks for sharing!

I am here for this Jane Austen analysis!

I love that Ward’s favorite book is Pride and Prejudice! I love Jane Austen!

kudos. fun fic

This was good. I wish you would do a sequel or just do these indefinitely they were really funny

me reading the summary "ITS KINDERGARTEN COP!C:" *GOES HYPER AND RUNS AROUND THE ROOM SCREAMING "BEST MOVIE EVER!"

sequel?

i lke that clint and nat are friends to the team

Great Job :) I love it :)

Thank god they finally know that she is missing

Disclaimer - I tend to review as I read, often answering my own questions, spell checking, adding pointless information or fun facts, songs that the chapter reminds me of. I talk more to the characters then the writer. If you can understand my reviews, then I applaud you ... anyway enjoy:)

I love Clintasha

Shoelace and bubblegum? Do share?

call down? DO you mean calm down

Nat!

I wonder who it is? Skye maybe? Or perhaps someone like Darcy, from Selvig's neck of he woods? Excited for more :P