So good

I adored the part with the conversation between Killian and Henry. I have a soft spot for Captain Cobra bonding.

The talk/argument between Emma and Killian was well written and very in character.

That ending sentence. Charming Cobra with the secret plan that works out perfectly. Loved it!

Nice work on this.

David and Henry are such children.
Very well written!

Woo! Best couple ever! A little more than anxious about Season 5, but that promo with Killian is AWESOME. LOVE. Him. Thanks for all your stories!

Oh this was GOOOOOOOD! I would have definitely preferred this talk between Emma and Hook than the same "I'm going back to New York" broken record we got on the show. The way you wrote this, well they actually were able to express their feelings and talk it out like adults and not having to second guess the other's feelings or bottle emotions up any longer. This is an incredibly written scenario. I also enjoyed how much of a wingman Henry was to Killian in this. But Killian was definitely smart to not assure him about something he couldn't promise without Emma's consent. I really enjoyed this one. Wonderful, wonderful work!

I really liked this. Killian has the patience of a damn saint, but I like how here we got a look at the insecurity inside. Plus, Captain Cobra is always awesome!

Oh my goodness! I discovered this story so late but I have to say I adored it! So sweet! You captured the voice of the characters really well and the last line had me actually laughing out loud! Awesome job!

{chuckles} Memories or not, Henry and David would still plot. LOL

mwhahahaha...grandpa and grandson bonding time...I like it:)

I love Henry and David being CS shippers...Loved it!

Too bad we didn't get to see the david planning. It was interesting that you chose memory loss henry .

Great! Brilliant! I want more! ;)