That was good! It had the Gremma ending we were all waiting for! I will say, though, that this one-shot seemed a sporadic and didn't really lead up to the ending... You know...? Don't get me wrong, it was still fantastic; the writing was superb and everything else was astounding! But the story just kinda felt a little jumpy... I know you were under a time limit of 15 minutes, so maybe I could suggest lengthening that duration? I don't know about you but I can't get anything done in 15 minutes when I'm writing. Lol. I get sidetracked or my OCD takes over way too often to get any real work done in just 15 minutes. Lol. I'll get, maybe, a paragraph, or two, if I'm lucky in that time. But yeah, that's just my little nonconventional, unelicited bit of advice. Not like you really need my advice on anything. Haha. Anyway, great chapter! Please update again soon!

Aww, that was cute and sweet and adorable! Those little cinnamon rolls being all cute and what-not! Awww!

Wow. Just wow. That was superb! Just remarkably splendid! Outstanding! Sheer wonder! Such talent you have here, I must say! Unmistakable, raw talent, indeed. I truly wish you would finish this one, though. Anyway, just how protective she is over Graham and how desirable it is for her to save him fills my heart with so much glee and awe–it makes my heart swell with such love and adoration for Gremma! Absolutely stupendous! It really shows how true their love is; pretty much all of these one-shots do. Brava!

The feels! My heart! The Gremma! My life! So perfect! Absolute perfection! Unequivocal magnificence!

My heart! The feels for Gremma! How true their love is rings in continuity; so pure and everlasting—that's how you epitomized it. And bravo to you on such a job well done! Truly remarkable! Outstandingly brilliant! You got me right in the strings of my heart; clipping them, leaving only but a few to hold the mangled organ to continue to feel for Gremmaforevermore.

That was sweet!

Aaaaaadorable! My puny little heart can't possibly handle the sheer sweetness of Emma and Graham! I just can't! No, I can! And that is why I do! Because I love them so much! And this one-shot was just so in-tune with Gremma! And it's perfection—plain and simple!

That's it?! That's all you're giving me?! –You're giving US?! How cruel to leave us so bitterly and with so little to supplement us! How very, very unjust art thou an author of thine people! ... Okay, lol, I'll stop. It was absolutely superb! Staggeringly delightful and downright glorious! I adored it thoroughly!

Aww, this was so sweet. Just that he comforted her when she needed comforting, and how he was protective of her emotions and that wall that she began building doors through. Just magnificent.

Ahhhhh! Soooo perfect!

Oh my God, I wish you finished this! I really, really want to finish reading this! This is such absolute, flawless perfection! I adore this! I cannot EVEN begin to tell you how much this made my heart swell with infatuation!

How magnificently splendid! Just stunning! No doubt in my mind how unfathomably remarkable that was!

Awww! I adored this! Absolutely adored! Ahhhhh! Perfection!

So immensely gorgeous! Absolutely stunning! I loved it!

This was so good! And my heart is still hurting–thank you very much for that! But it was phenomenal, nonetheless.