This is THE BEST Kingdom Hearts fic I have ever read! I can't believe it's been so long since you updated!

I love the way you write and the way your characters act and think! You're an excellent author and I'm hoping you'll update this sometime...maybe...

-_-

... are you still there? ( update soon please!

oh yes, i forgot to mention.

if you plan on not making riku gay, then don't make him get with kairi either.

just make this story about friendshipishy stuff.

pairings just make everyone OOC...unless it's kairi and sora which is canon... though kairi annoys me.

if you really have to make a pairing, then stick with kairi x sora... and riku can angst more on how he's alone and stuff. XD

or you can have one-sided riku sora... but very very very light hints that no one can tell. unless they have a really expensive yaoi detector implanted into their brains... P

or you can have one-sided heartless riku.

just kidding. cuz that would be very distrubing. but it fits in with the hunger part ._.

KYA! _ it doesn't really matter, but just contine with your fic, asap! XD! your fans are waiting!

uhm... duence pisses me off. like, really pisses me off. he's strong, knows a lot, and he's very annoying. i especially dislike his dialouge. / it *really* pisses me off.

change his dialouge to something a bit more interesting, and less childish. he rambles a lot, like a little kid, and it's rather annoying. especially when he obviously knows stuff that riku doesn't...

PLEASE change duece. i want him to be a hot character. he has so much potential. just make him talk less or something.

i've noticed that when you dive into riku's opinions on something, your writing rambles a bit. try to avoid that.

btw, i know riku is angtsy, but the angstyness kinda dies when riku turns into crying!riku.

your riku isn't crying!riku, but if he cries within the next two chapters, i'm labeling him as one. P riku's pretty weak, but i don't really think it takes 2 hours for him to get his emotions under control. o_O

your riku sometimes has random thoughts that go against his character. overall though, your riku is like THE KH riku. ) good jorb

maya is a cool character. me likes.

tell your readers why mint calls maya a snake, please. i feel like there's some hidden meaning behind that... XD

i love rue. he's a hot character. me likes.

like his interacting with mint. _

I LOVE YOUR PLOT, BTW! update soon!

(i'll be rar from now on when reviewing... hehe. _)

you needa stop calling riku "keyblade master" at really random times. i know you don't want to call him "riku" or "he" too much, but in rather important moments, weird descriptions of riku ruin the moment. you also used "silver-haired boy" (or something similar, i forgot) in some previous chapter a lot.

wait, is riku THE keyblade master, or A keyblade master?

ACK COOL KEYBLADE NAME! XD! THIS IS AWESOME!

blah! your plot is too cool. maya feels evil though. P too much hagaren is bad for your paranoia

yay! ff7 people!

AND you mentioned kairi! man, your fic just gets better and better.

and this chapter's cliffhanger was a doozy. _ so cruel. i hope you update a least 5 times a year...

rue and mint don't belong to you? oh darn...

dude, i have already forgotten how they look like. 'cept for the fact that rue has silveryish hair. P

next chapter!

this is a really good kingdom hearts fic.

i haven't come across anything like this since i found ruaki, like 1 year ago... ~_~

please please PLEASE do not make this yaoi. most fics that i've read so far totally screwed up riku's personality. very very badly.

for once i would like to read a fic about good ol' friendship. just because two guys hang out alot, doesn't mean they're automatically gay, people.

also, what happened to kairi? i know riku's looking for sora inorder for riku to get out of the mess he's in, but didn't riku really like kairi in the game? (gr... i don't like kairi too much...) well, i don't really know what the endithing in order to reach his goal, no matter who he hurt...until ansem took over his body and almost killed kairi. i'd think that riku would have learned from that lesson and be just a lil more considerate of other worlds and other people.

but he IS feeling a lot of guilt over the destroying lotsa worlds. so that's good. )

you can use spell checker. wow, that's better than 75% of ffnet, right there! good job!

w00t! off to read the rest of your chapters!

Keep up the great work!

*does a Sora pout*

I really hope you hurry with the next chapter, this story is so good!

I also hope you might make Sora and Riku's relayionship more than just a tight friendship, I am a RikuxSora fan after all. _

Thank-you for the great story!

Chow!

~Junsui

aw that was a good chappie! XD please update soon! you're story is so good! It's getting even more interesting as the plot moves on! please continue!

Nya... Aren't you ever going to update? I love this story... I've been hoping for months...
:'(

Great fic! I love it! Its all so mysterious. I really wanna know how all the pieces fit together... Really well done! Update soon!

**stands wonderingly on her head** I haven't even READ this fic in a long time . . . not even gone to the KH section of ... ah well, i'm reviewing now, ya? This is good, but... it lacks... something. something... **hrrom...**

Great talent I sense in you. Take much time you should, and perfect it shall be.

This story is very well but together. It gives you a chance to find out about what may have happened after Sora left. It also lets the reader into the head of the once villain. A very good story. Excellent work!