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Critic chapter 7 . 4/14/2017 I feel kinda weirded out about this chapter Cause:why is everyone so damn calm about this!? Like why?why did gizmo not freak out when she found out about being a elemental dragon? I know she is smart and all but she is 4 years old! She doesnt know about showdowns or magic she knows science and theory why isnt she even a bit freaked out?and what happened in the 2 years she didnt see her dad and the last time she saw him he was being tortured why isnt she the least bit traumatized he could have been dead for all she knew in those 2 years they didnt see each other This is a rant im sorry if you found it insulting but this is my opinion P.S:Lol did chase forget that gizmo was in the room or did he want her to see her father getting kissed by a guy that she just met?hihi |
xedrix666 chapter 18 . 8/31/2016 ok so when i saw OC i was a bit turned off, but i love it when im proved wrong. i LOVE it! gizzmo is SO ADORABLE! i love her! and i love how older jack was written so well! and the father/daughter dynamic is so cute! still cant believe jack jus killed shadow, but it was cool. pretty please update! i want to see how jack and gizzmo develops! |
Wyle23 chapter 1 . 4/15/2015 Wow, talk about paragraphs that need to be split/shortened. And as if your terrible paragraph structure isn't bad enough, your sentences are filled to the brim with errors. Combine these two facts and you've a first chapter that is unbearably tedious to read. |
Avid Reader chapter 15 . 3/15/2015 Ooh, I wonder what this training will be? Just finished reading all chapters, then was delighted to see that you updated with a new one! _ |
SoulMore chapter 12 . 12/10/2014 FAN! |
IamEnVIOUS chapter 12 . 9/9/2014 Looking forward to the next update. |
random bug chapter 12 . 9/9/2014 so cute keep it going love it. |
IamEnVIOUS chapter 11 . 8/20/2014 Update soon! |
IamEnVIOUS chapter 10 . 8/20/2014 Nice update, sorry I missed that. Been busy. |
Ally chapter 9 . 7/11/2014 More, please more! I love Gizmo! She's so adorable! XD 3 |
IamEnVIOUS chapter 9 . 7/9/2014 nice update. |
IamEnVIOUS chapter 8 . 6/19/2014 I look forward to reading more. |
IamEnVIOUS chapter 7 . 6/10/2014 I am hooked my friend. |
IamEnVIOUS chapter 6 . 5/28/2014 OOOOOHHHHHHH...UPDATE! |
IamEnVIOUS chapter 5 . 5/20/2014 Awwww...sniff sniff. |