Even though the plot is good i'll be dropping this story and not reading any more of it.
The reason is simple.

So far the A/N and the omake are twice as long as the actual story posted. I find this ridiculous, stupid and overall disrespecting of my time and any other person who tries to read this.

If you yourself won't devote enough time to the actual story, why would i or anyone else waste our time reading it?

I think you confused Achilles with hector... Achilles is the one with the ankle weakness. And he can't be harmed by anyone who doesn't have divinity.

Hmm... it would have been better if he had 999 circuits if the kyuubi liked nines. Or even 999,999,999. Nine nines I guess... lol!

Still waiting for continuation... Good job, by the way... Hopefully, this story will not be abandoned...

Dude, you're just narrating most of the story. Pace yourself more, write some day-to-day interactions, insert some humor, add in some bonding between everybody. This story is really dry.

Describe things better. I don't mean everybody's appearance but places, objects, conversations, all of them need to be fleshed out.

Arcueid! She's awesome!

you know that's not how Dragon Slayer works right? : )

i can't continue anymore. i quit bruh
_. anyway goodluck on your fanfic. it's not a cup of my tea but i hope others will like your fanfic. that's all. have a pleasant day.!

it's Einzbern or Einsbern. not einsenbern.

this is cringey af. still gotta read more.

it's Zelretch not Zeltrich. also it's Bijuu not Bijuu.

The title got me, thinking that it fits Naruto perfectly. but then at the end it's a harem-type fanfiction. how annoying, still i'll give it a chance and read it till the last updated chapter.

btw good job writing this fic.

Can you add sakura to the harem. Right now she is going to cling to naruto's side like a limpet and she deserves some happiness.

fclkkkk

goooooood

goo

g oo o d ch p