Now this... this is some good quality stuff right here

HILARIOUS! Will there be any more funny stories in the future?

Hahaha awww this was cute and funny! And so in character! You got their personalities and voices spot on! Well done!

Love that ending

Ha, great one! Made me laugh!

XD cute! Very funny too. One thing though, you were putting spaces between the words and the quotations, you shouldnt do that. If a character is speaking you should just write it like "I am king of the world!" Not " I am king of the world! " it just makes it awkward and unsteady in its flow. -Cat.

lol

This is, like, cannon in my head now XD It's so in-character!

Lol! I was reading this exactly while watching Night at the Museum! So it was so easy to read this in their voices!

So freaking hilarious. Please check out my story in the Nightmare Before Christmas regular section

Lolz, that was actually really funny. xD Poor Jedie and Ockie. I'm glad they're fine. It's really good how you got their personalities right, I love that. Keep it up, you're good at it!