Interesting approach for a time travel. It made me laugh ho Hinata awoke xD ngl. I hope you continue this, I'm wondering what she will do to try to change the story, and her psyche's development.

What in the cooking oil? Wait hold up, so this is the chuunin exams right? And Hinata is a genin again, but with her memories (visions?) intact? Does that mean she can see the future? Or just what the heck is going on?! Either way I am HOOKED! It's been so long since you've updated, I can only hope that this isn't abandoned because it is sooo good! Your writing is superb and your characterization is very interesting. Please please pleaseeeee come back to this, I beg of you! Much love :)

Ohh so Fuyubi was ber son. Dude I cried sooooo bad! I miss him too even though I technically never met him and never will, but my girl's son is my own so yeah. I hope they chopped the head of that assassin who dared murder an innocent sweet little boy, fucking monster. Anywho that was a lot, pretty much answers all the questions I had on the previous chapter. But now I'm so confused. I thought Naruto and Sakura were dead? And what of Sasuke and Madara? Ehh lemme proceed to the next chapter and find answers to these questions. Much love :)

I've always skittered around this story because I thought I read it and only now decided to re-read it only to find that it is completely new to me! I don't know what happened, whether I read the old version or an entire different story from this one, but aI could've sworn... huh, weird lol. That is not to say I love it less, quite the opposite actually. I just have so many questions! Why did Hina kill Naruto? Oh Kami, whyyyy? Also who is the boy with the black eyes and gentle smile she referred to? And who is Fuyubi? And why did she say Madara sought to put "another" child in her belly? Ohmigosh I'm definitely intrigued and itching to find out more! Thank you for writing and sharing! Let me read on :)

I really like the entirety of this chapter, I'm looking forward to when you'll update (only if you want to)! The depths of the storyline in the second chapter, mainly the latter was the main reason I've become invested. The unexpected factor of time travel and her mental breakdown REALLY caught my attention. This chapter also did very well switching between flashbacks and reality while conveying info easily. Hopefully the next chapter doesn't come five years late! SORRY IF THAT WAS AGGRESSIVE BUT PLS UPDATE 3

three chapters and got me on edge it was crazy good, no matter that was stopped here, good job

WHAT THE HELL!? Omg this story has so much damned potential. Your characterization of Hinata Is so riveting. Your writing style is amazing. Like really dark and riveting and laced with emotion. You are pulling this off so well. My own child was diagnosed with a life threatening illness and to read her heartbreak and loss was really emotional for me. I cannot imagine how the loss of her child will impact her new life. To read that Madara, despite being this callous, evil character, cried when their son was murdered was heartbreaking. This story is all sorts of messed up. I hope you decide to continue. I know 2020s been a shit year, hope you are safe and doing well.

hey this is a great story please update

I know you're busy, but please don't abandon this...

I'm just going to cry myself to sleep thinking about how this magnificent story won't be updated anytime soon...

is it okay of me to hold out hope that in 2020 you'll come back with a new chapter? I'VE BEEN EAGER SINCE 2014 AND I LOVE THIS. hope all is well

good story, i want more

This chapter is AMAZING!
I would read this story forever if you wrote it
It’s beautiful and poignant and heartbreaking
And Hinata and sasuke are so flawed but trying so hard to fit and repent.
I want to beat them up and comfort them simultaneously.
To me that’s the mark of a great writer!
Kudos!

Thank you so much for this hbdfh! This story is downright enchanting. The writing style is so amazing holy fuck. Still hoping this amazing story is not yet abandoned

I hope you'll update soon