This deserves more love. Seriously. I literally couldn't stop reading it last night and it was all I could think about today before I got home! Amazing job.:-)

So, given I'm late to the party, I was just going to read to the end and leave one review, but I had to stop on this chapter.

This has been one of the most eloquent and thoughtful Jazz-death-fallout fics I've read. I've loved it, despite the utter melancholy. But the changing of the glyph? Did me in. I'm not even exaggerating to say that one line reduced me to a sobbing mess.

And it's been the build up that made it so perfect, I know its not over, but that final piece of acceptance after the journey here, just broke the dam.

I have read just about all of your stories and I love every single one of them.
I am a major Prowl/Jazz person and I love the way you portray them and just everything you write is amazing and I sincerly hope you write more for the two.

That was so...so..so incredible touching! TTTT
I truly love your story it's absolutely amazing and has so much love, happiness, sadness, friendship and hope in it!
You are a great writer. :3

Reika

I loved this! Poor Prowl, it always hurts to read fic where Jazz dies TT ohoo is there going to be a sequel? I really hope so! awesome job

How in the world did I just find this amazing story?! I haven't been able to put it down since I found it a few days ago!

Aw, love every part of this! I've been reading a bit at a time when I need a break at work and it's really gotten me through a super-crazy week, so thank you! Oh Prowl, I just love how you've written him, and the twins! And everyone! Such a deft touch, master storyteller as always 3 And little Jester! Hee! Oh golly, what a handful already - and I love Prowl's response to Lennox: "He is is own, and it will be my privilege to guide him as he discovers that" - yes, exactly _

Wow! This was an amazing story! I adored the dynamic you presented for the command group, and for how Prowl interacts with the foot soldiers. He's presented in an unfavorable light so often, it's refreshing to show a caring and protective side. This has become a new favorite! Thank you so much for your time and efforts!

Omp! This was an awesome fic! I loved every chapter!

Awww what a good ending. I hope there will be a squeal on little Jester growing up.

Finally...I am so glad you brought Prowl's sparkling to life. What a treat. Great name and wonderful ending! Any hope for a sequel?

Lovely. A perfect ending. Great work.

That is a nice little ending. Fitting name, for a child of Jazz's. :)

Beautiful.

Yahoo! Bluestreak and Wheeljack have arrived! The whole welcoming party scene is too fun for words. Everyone is excited, but no one wants to get too close ) And did I say how excited I am that Bluestreak has arrived! So hard to see him sad not to see Prowl there to meet him. But the reunion back at the base was even sweeter ) Yep, Bluestreak would figure out about the Sparkling right away, and then tell the whole world. At least Prowl didn't get upset about it. I think Bluestrek's arrival will be very good for him.

And it looks like his relationship with the twins is progressing as well. He mentions them in the circle of those who he values as part of his support, and the connection is strong and mutual given that Siders is willing to challenge him about trying his battle computer for fear of losing Prowl again. The last lines about how Sideswipe felt soothed by Prowl's voice during the battle sim and how special he felt at Prowl's feelings over their victory. Yep, feelings are good )