When your done with this book and reach the Johto series can you have Ash catch a a female Sneasel just like how he caught budew in this story, for her personality she would act very flirtatious, especially towards Ash and Pikachu, but just like her trainer and the others she like to train and is a force not to be reckoned with. And although she helps Ash win a lot of battles, when it comes to Pokémon Contest she is one of his greatest. When it comes to the clothing of those Contest she wears a maid outfit, and also please have her evolve into a Weavile. I hope you accept this request and have a nice day.

This is for a grammar mistake “why let someone else train your pokemon? it is your duty as a trainer to teach your —pokémj— all they can possibly know to grow and if you don’t know something then you learn it.”

this is just to register a grammar mistake when they get back in the ballon after the team rocket fiasco it says “ash had been very anxious to polite the balloon” what it should be is “ash had been very anxious to pilot the balloon” either way fantastic story.

the dialogue is extremely sappy and unrealistic... likes there's no slang or of the like, and it feels like reading those stories with "You are _" instead of, "you're _" if you know what I mean..

First I just want to say that I hope you update this wonderful story soon, and second I really can’t wait on what your going to do in the Black and White series.

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE this story it’s so freaking amazing, the plot and story are awesome, the writing and grammar is great and it actually feels like ash has earned his pokémon they and him weren’t just handed power he earns it through blood sweat and tears and i don’t think most stories show that properly but this one definitely does can’t wait for the rest of the story. Definitely my favourite pokémon story, better than the anime in my opinion although i didn’t see all of it. but anyway i’m rambling keep up the absolutely fantastic work and i hope you have a good life and find happiness because this story has made me so darn happy. seeya

This is a great story so far as for the harem and Pokemon he should capture in the future besides canon I would suggests...
Ash:
Kanto: Growlithe, Vulpix, Kabuto, Areodactyl, Slowpoke, Meowth, Seel, Ryhorn, Venonat, Abra, Ponyta
Johto: Houndour, Murkrow, Misdreavus, Wooper, Magby, Elekid, Miltank, Stantler, Spinarak, Sneasel
Hoenn: Mudkip (shiny), Aron, Sableye, Electrike, Duskull, Clampearl, Spheal, Absol, Bagon, Beldum, Anorith, Poochyena
Sinnoh: Skorupi, Spiritomb, Cranidos, Shieldon, Hippopotas, Snover, Shinx
Unova: Deino, Axew (shiny), Rufflet, Lillipup, Purrloin, Pansage, Pansear, Venipede, Solosis, Zorua, Bouffalant, Cryoganal, Cubchoo, Blitzle, Klink, Golett, Tirtouga
Kalos: Honedge, Tyrunt, Espurr, Litleo (male), Skiddo, Phantump
Alola: Jangmo-o, Dhelmise, Yungoose, Vulpix, Sandshrew, Pikipeck, Wimpod
Galar: Grookey, Sobble, Scorbunny, Zigzagoon, Ponyta, Rookiedee, Yamper, Nickit, Rolycoly, Dreepy, Yamask, Impidimp
Harem:
Kanto: Jeannet Fisher
Johto: Lyra, Whitney
Hoenn: May, Flannery, Roxanne, Phoebe
Sinnoh: Dawn, Zoey
Unova: Georgia, Bianca, Skyla
Kalos: Serena, Miette, Shauna
Alola: Lana, Lillie, Mallow
Galar: Bea, Marnie, Nessa

These are just suggestions just a reminder. Keep up the great work and hope you update soon.

If Pikachu ends up with a harem of his own I hope you add Ash’s Snivy in it.

By Arceus, this is probably the best world building i have possibly read in a single chapter. You've done such a great job with it. I am astounted, yet excited for more to come.

please update soon

After reading all 17 chapters I just want to say that out of all the other Pokémon stories this one has to be #1 in the greatest list, I seriously hope you don’t abandon the story and update really soon.

please update soon

Please update

When you said that Ash’s Pokémon will reach a level that’s higher than champion, does that mean they will have the same strength and power as the legendaries.

Good lord feeding Dragonite is going to be like feeding snorelaxs. That kind of pokeblock food is a must for large Pokémon. Update soon