LOVED IT!

how could yoooooooooou
whywhywhy ...ok i'm fine i'm fine... HOW COULD YOU.

So good

Finally a good story. Congrats, that was a job well done! To celebrate the happy ending I suck in 150 alco-popsicles.

Just noticed that the Story is complete. Splendid, simply splendid. So it's one of the rare gems in this huge pile of AU-poo. Thank you for writing it.

so far so great. I hope the Story does not run short with updates before things start to get interesting.

Cauute! This is my favorite Jelsa story-not too much romance or missing, barely any swear words, no sexual innuendos and crap... This fic is perfect!

I like the 'killer lady smile' that makes Elsa blush! I love this fic

Awesome story. :)

Fantastic! No sequel?

I don't think Jack was written wrong one bit! I enjoyed the read, please keep up writing!

And the ship sails, yay! Here comes Jack to save the day. Hopefully he can get Elsa out if there before Pitch tries to get to her again. I think that Jack will go with her, just because he can't lose her now.

This is a great story when is the next chapter going to come can't wait

I think it'll end with Elsa staying with pitch and jack seeing her walk away from him even though she can see him and him trying to kill himself but he can't so... Sequel!

Ahaha 'pitch black eyes' very clever but very mean at the same time. Jack better have his powers back so he can save her and actually kill Pitch.. that evil little mofo.