This was amazing! I love it so so so so so much!

GINEVRA
for a long time I thought it was Ginerva too but then I listened to Deathly Hallows as an audio book.

hippogriff

I am British we don't have that sort of thing here

Presents I left my presents (as in gifts) at my aunt's house
Presence "Your presence is required in the Oval Office immediately Mr President"

biCORN horn

duAL consisting of two parts, elements, or aspects.
duEL a contest with deadly weapons arranged between two people in order to settle a point of honour.

interesting, your spelling is not great though

my dear you sorely need a beta reader, this story has a ton of potential but honestly it needs a lot of work.

LEG ILL I MENCY NOT LEGITIMACY

hey! I don't know if you're still writing, but I know you did one-shots with this story. any chance we could see what happens to Albus with Severus, Minerva and Hooch? Would be an interesting conversation! Thank you!

Halò,

so far I love this story, it makes sense story-wise and it's written well. Good job!
The only thing I have to say that in your story Minerva is speaking Irish Gaelic and not Scottish Gaelic.
Màthair is the same in both languages but in Scottish Gaelic Grandmother means màthair màthar or màthair athar, even though seanmhair is fine too. But seanmàthair is Irish.
Sorry, for being picky, I guess I have been obsessed with Minerva too long to let it slip. But I love that you put Gaelic in there in the first place. Not many fanfictions portray her heritage well.

I wish you all the best and a lot of Inspiration,
Athena

This was a great story. Thanks for writing and sharing it.

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