Do you think you would continue this? I think it would be an amazing story with Mal ACTUALLY having a soft spot for Duncan. Please? ;-;

I like the fact that Duncan is the one with the upper hand at the end in this story. I can always like a story where Mal is being soft and Duncan is the tough guy. I hope you write more stories like this one!

I know it'd be way out of character, but I still really want Mal to fall in love with Duncan, in the scary obsessive kind of way. It'd be just as messed-up as it would be adorable.

Mal is brutal. Poor Duncan! He never gets a break with Mal. At least he found a way to get out of this ordeal this time.

Keep up the good work!

That was hot, what Mal did I personally thing was hilarious, sounds like fun :P. Lol this was very well written and a better sex scene than what I could write (that made no sense) basically I loved it well done!

Is it bad I want Duncan to in for often? I think Mal is getting soft :3c
Anyway, love your writing and hope to see more of it in the future!