| Reviews for Hoping For a Better Future: Book One |
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   LoveFanFictionForLife chapter 1 . 9/7 Really good story |
| Calmzone1 chapter 19 . 7/18 Very well done! A bit more of a hint in some place, but most of it I remembered without needing the book beside me. I loved some of the reactions and can’t wait to see what they have in store for Dumbledore |
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/16 Bitch u did not just do that |
| OliviaPotter251620 chapter 2 . 6/12 WHOOP WHOOP FINALLY |
| Sophie A chapter 19 . 5/26 Hi! I just finished the story. I love how you write the characters and the reactions so much! Do you plan on continuing with the next books? Because I would love to see the events in your style. |
| MrsGPotter2 chapter 19 . 5/12 This was very enjoyable. I hope at some point you go back to finish the remaining books! |
| Ame's world chapter 19 . 5/5 A superb fanfic Thanks a lot |
| Guest chapter 19 . 4/7 please put the next book up, i can't wait for it! |
| Guest chapter 19 . 3/21 when can we expect the next book? i love it |
| Violet chapter 19 . 1/28 Actually Snape had a worse childhood. His parents weren’t dead but they might as well be, because they act worse. Harry was treated well in Hogwarts most of the time at least, Snape not so much |
| Nihatclodra chapter 2 . 12/4/2019 The way you have this formatted makes it near impossible to figure out what section is them reacting to what... |
| The One True Nobody chapter 2 . 11/8/2019 These "no text from the books!" reading-the-books fics might actually be readable if the writers had the good sense to indicate what passages are being responded to. If if you have a copy of the book on hand, it's a little tough to tell where to stop and start without a visible stopping and starting point. At least you had the good sense to include divider lines, which is more than I can say for a lot of others. But this is basically impossible to follow. |
| Bookworm54321 chapter 19 . 9/13/2019 This was amazing! I was a bit lost at some points without knowing what parts of the book they were up to, but I really enjoyed this fic as a whole! I kept forgetting moody was there and would have a bit of a shock every time he was mentioned, and I loved how Tonks sorta became an older sister to the younger 4 just after a day of reading about their adventures! I also love how you showed the realistic faults of the characters and also showed some of the better points of all of them! I also really loved how you showed Harry throughout the fic and showed that he was observant and the effect that the Dursley’s has on him, so yeah- this fic was amazing! |
| sapphireeaglequill chapter 19 . 7/22/2019 Are you ever going to write the rest of the books? I would love to read those fics! |
| Serpent91 chapter 19 . 6/17/2019 Well done indeed! |
