Reviews for Paid in Full
Azimuth Zero chapter 1 . 5/20
So I just finished Infinite and Burial at Sea, and suffice to say it shattered my heart into approximately a million and two pieces. Thank you for fixing it so I can breathe again. You're a lifesaver.
Angelustatt chapter 1 . 1/4/2017
Gorgeous! Simply gorgeous! I actually teared up reading this! And I love how you included the Luteces! So perfect and I read them in their voices! Well done! You've made my day with this story!
TreesofPaper chapter 1 . 11/25/2016
I love it! One thing I don't get though; how did Elizabeth get to a different timeline from her second and final death? The first death by Big Daddy sent her to a sort of Limbo Paris between timelines created by her mind, but she chose to come back and save Sally. But after her death saving Sally, how did she get to this Real Paris and meet Booker and her younger self? Is she a ghost only Booker and Anna can see? Is she immortal?
sbw214 chapter 1 . 10/18/2016
I think this is the most perfect ending that I could have imagined for this story. Booker's "I made a promise," line had this 6"6' man crying. Thank you.
Jack Revell chapter 1 . 9/19/2016
Amazing ending and a ending that can make anyone cry with joy. An amazing piece of work you should be proud of
Luke chapter 1 . 6/20/2016
Great ending I prefer it to the dark version and has the series kinda end on a good note great job
Fixer1138 chapter 1 . 3/18/2016
Yes please. So much better than that other crap ending to that stupid DLC I've chosen to ignore. You'd think people would have learnt their lesson about unnecessarily killing protagonists after Mass Effect 3. Regardless, thank you for giving us an alternative I can agree with.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/13/2016
Man this was beautiful, reading this immediately after finishing Burial at sea while listening to La vie en rose. I like the original ending, because of how tragically poetic it is. But they deserved to meet again, it's nice this way too...
MoxieMEC chapter 1 . 12/24/2015
This was the greatest ending I think they're could ever be for Burial at Sea. I was very much disappointed by Elizabeth's end, but this left me feeling better about how it ended.
Bravo, sir.
mjyoun chapter 1 . 7/14/2015
Wow. Incredible! I started sobbing at Elizabeth's and Booker's reunion. This is a definite must read for Bioshock fans out there! Truly Amazing! 10/10
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2015
I'm so happy that you wrote this.

Thank you.
Fatal Grief chapter 1 . 6/13/2015
Beautiful. Didn't make me cry. Must be hay-fever. :)
Elsa the Queen of Snow chapter 1 . 4/20/2015
Beautiful.
WeAreAllBaka chapter 1 . 4/10/2015
Absolutely beautiful :'(
lonewolfe13 chapter 1 . 4/8/2015
While I will not deny that this is an amazing short story to encompass such an amazing game (and game series). However I do feel Irrational Games ended the game the proper way according to the unofficial rules of tragic heroes from J.R.R Tolkien and Shakespeare. While I thoroughly believe that the hero should never live happily ever after, I must say this does give me the feel good feelings the game didn't give me.
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