I've read a fair number of your stories at this point, and this one was enjoyable as ever. In the AN, you mentioned that there would be more stories set in this timeline, with Breaker and Shadow Stalker, and I really hope that's the case. I'll totally be looking through your stories to find any of them. Thanks for being creative and sharing your ideas with us!

Intriguing and (well enough written in my opinion) a very good story. I like it, I like it a lot! It seems to be meshing the realities quite well, and I can hardly wait (but I will) to see where it all goes. I do know this, when someone who is not the creator of a character, writes about them, it is to have them do something that the creator doesn't want to or didn't think of. I know that I always think of my favorite characters doing things, I have never read of in books or seen them doing in movies. I think it is fantastic that others (here in "FanFiction") are actually writing their stories of what they want them to do in a "What If" world. For those who complain that the characters would not do this or that, forget them. You need to write this first for yourself, and then for the rest of us who do enjoy your take on what just might, could, should, would and probability (if a frog had wings, his ass wouldn't bump the ground nearly so often) can happen. I do know this as well, I am enjoying it and will follow it as long as you will write it. Also, do NOT feel pushed to post, sometimes the words and thoughts just flow and sometimes you have to cogitate for a bit. Just learn to let them grow at their own pace and those of us who appreciate them will be here to read them when they are posted.

Thank you so much for sharing.

An interesting start to what promises to be a good story. I have read quite a number of "FanFiction" stories, and many have been enjoyable. It looks like it will likely take a few chapters to get all your main characters and store line fleshed out, but with the hints provided I like where I see this going.

Thanks for sharing!

Cute. A little too fluffy but good

honestly one of the cutest fics ever

favorite worm romance ending

Tell me if I got this right. Taylor's power is very specifically dimensional layering. Much like the endbringers or fletchette's projectiles, she is capable of duplicating herself in parallel dimensions. Every time she amps up by a level, that's another dimension that she's placed herself in. That's why she gets stronger, tougher, and has more mass without getting larger.

You know, if someone had told me that I would read a story in which I liked and rooted for Sophia, I’d tell them that it would be unlikely. If they then told me that not only would I like her, but I would be supportive of her and Taylor as a couple, and that they would both be friends with a totally sane Emma, I’d have thought that they were crazy.

It’s hard to organically and believably alter canon so drastically, but I think that is one of the strengths of this story, as well as you as an author.

I look forwards to the continuance of your other stories. Thank you for producing such enjoyable works.

The fight was 2ell written and tense, but the last line, oh my laugh... :D

OK, I didn't think I'd ever read a Sophia I could like. This is as close as I vee got. Kudos for that.

Hmmm, maybe Sophia got shaken out of her mindset a little too easily, but otherwise great chapter and intro. Like it

reread. still good
so nice to see Sophia a Hero

thankd

Since it claims I left a review on the last chapter, this goes here: Wish there was a sequel.

I could have cried when Sophia and Taylor embraced and kissed in the end.

love conquers all!

I'm always more into niche pairings and almost never follow canon pairings, (i.e. harry potter - Harry/Ginny and Hermonie/Ron makes me shudder) and shadow/skitter has become one of my fave pairings, even though its really difficult to pull of, especially the closer you stick to canon.

despite been one of your first stories, this is actually the second to last of your stories I read, and is probably my third fave story after It Gets Worse and Trump Card.

The different way Shadow Stalker is portrayed in this story and also in Confrontation and All Alone actually makes me like Sophia despite how shes portrayed in canon, I have to wonder to which degree was she responsible for corupting Emma and did Emma serve to enable Shadow Stalker by buying into her philosophy and not challenging her preditor/prey mentality? a lot of people hate on canon Sophia for been a twisted bully who gets of on killing criminals with lethal arrows, but personally i think canon Emma is actually worse despite the lack of super powers, she betrayed taylor, and could have got sophia to back of but never did