Hahaha! I can actually imagine it and smiling to it. Good job!This was a great story even though I was hoping for more chapters as the anime doesn't show this sibling's love often.

Haha it was soo funny. I really love Rin as overprotective brother and this is the only incest that I ship. Good job!

Lol. This was awesome.

This was great! I'm laughing so hard just imagining this. Oh man, awesome job!

the fudge~! so far this is my fav Free! fanfic xDD

Big brother did not approve xD lol.

I completely lost my sanity at the "and finally there was a hydrophile who Rin was pretty sure would've married the ocean by now if it is allowed..." line XD

Please make this a series! It's freaking adorable! More Fanfics! More fanfics! This was hilarious, I love that onii-chan didn't approve

THIS IS JUST SO ADORABLE! YOU SHOULD MAKE A SERIES MANN!
NOT JUST ONE SHOTS!
THIS IS TOO AWESOME!
I LOVE THE WAY U THINK!
SPARROW OUT!

XDXDXDXDXD Oh I love this. I love this a lot.

This was too much haha. I loved watching Rin slowly unwind. Nice work.

Ohhhh i love how protective Rin is 3
Really funny story. Enjoying it sooo much

Oh god. You're such a genius. I was laughing the whole time and you got me so fond of the overprotective Rin! The eye twitching and gun perfect was hilarious. PLEASE PLEAS PLEASE WRITE MORE!

Slightly Yandere!Rin is hilarious. And I gotta feel for him- its gotta suck knowing your adorable little sister is surrounded by gorgeous half naked men who are all crushing on her. Even Haru of all people is getting in on the action! XD

I especially loved the ending. "The next day Rin did two things-bought a giant, sparkly shark charm that was bigger and outshined the rest of their pathetic charms and also applied for his gun permit. It was time to show them big brother did not approve." I literally fell on the floor laughing.

I am so favoriting this.

I really loved this story and I hope I can find you on tumblr! Over-protective Rin is so funny and I love it!

This was so adorable! /melts