Reviews for Chaos
Teanni chapter 4 . 11/7/2014
So they finally kissed. Felt like my heart was going to stop. Good rewrite of those scenes. Doesn't feel forced.
Elizz chapter 4 . 5/23/2014
I just adore your writing style and how you progress a story. I haven't read Fusion yet: I'm just starting it. Thank you for writing!
joann97 chapter 4 . 4/24/2014
I just love your stories! This is the first time I'm reviewing but I have read all 3 stories. I love that Beth and Daryl are a slow burn. Made that much awaited kiss so much more meaningful, not to mention hot! I really wish this was happened on the show. Off to read the last part now!
cemmia chapter 4 . 4/21/2014
So good! Love it!
Emma chapter 4 . 4/16/2014
When I read that there would be another story in the series I had to take a moment to take in a few deep breaths because the way you write Daryl and Beth is so incredibly perfect I was really sad to see the story ending. Though there are many talented writers who write Daryl and Beth well, you are the only one I think who has actually stayed true to the characters and the way their bond would really develop.

And OH MY GOD that kissing scene don't even get me started. Beautifully written and so stunningly like them. Wonderful job and I can't wait for the next installment!
micaelaah chapter 4 . 4/6/2014
I love your story! Im from Argentina xD Keep doing this please!
ruger33 chapter 4 . 4/4/2014
Ahhh gosh, that first kiss! I love how you went about writing that...flawless. You didn't rush it and that's what I loved most about it. And then Rick catching them...lol, so funny. You did the scene with Rick, Carl and The Claimers justice, btw. Very well done. Looking forward to 'Fusion'!
damita118 chapter 4 . 4/4/2014
So beautiful! I really enjoyed. This, thank you. So much! :D
irishleesh93 chapter 4 . 4/4/2014
I don't know how you managed to get a make-out scene in that mess but you did. Great work. :)
AMiserableLove chapter 4 . 4/4/2014
This story is perfect.

Absolute perfection.

I can't wait for the next installment! :)
Multishipper1 chapter 4 . 4/4/2014
duuuuuuuude that was perfect! more than i was waiting for and just how these last episodes should've happened. thanks for another amazing story. i'll be waiting for the next one ;)
vivalachair chapter 4 . 4/4/2014
Absolutely lovely. Thank you for these stories! You're such a talented writer and have a real skill for writing these characters. I hope to see more Beth/Daryl stories from you in the future!
MilitaryWife chapter 4 . 4/4/2014
Loved this! And once again, the last line says it all. "The End." I thought it was a great fic and you did a great job representing the characters. I loved Beth and Michonne's "girl" chats and I loved the way you had Beth/Daryl interact. Thanks for writing!
Featherstrike chapter 4 . 4/4/2014
They finalyl kissed! And it was amazing. That line Rick said about hanging a sock on a tree next time: golden. The aftermath was awkward yet so natual. I could really see it go down like that: Rick teasing and Daryl and Beth being kind of flustered but in no way ashamed. :) I can't get enough of your stories! Keep up your great work! :)
rckyfrk chapter 4 . 4/4/2014
Nice job retrlling the ambush/fight scene, incorporating Beth and Daryl, but not needing to describe each step blow for blow.
And their kiss...*sigh*. ...perfect.
Looking forward to fusion.
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