...so he Will not be a womanizer but an alcoholic...works for me, when is the next chapter

...let the flirting begin between Ginmau and Cross...even thoguh she is a child, Cross knows no bound

Let the pairing begins! And it should be Noden

You are the very first SI fic i have evr read...and i love it

Continued, please

TT

Love your story now following! . Please update soon!

Please update, I really enjoyed reading this story

Omg it hurts so much to know how long ago this was updated, especially when it ends on such an awesome cliff hanger damnit.

Please update soon

I must say, those few starting chapters where very interesting. I am definitely invested now. I can’t wait to to see what kind of story you’re planning!

I am a big fan of OC stories, unfortunately there aren’t many in the DGM fandom that strike my interest so I was so happy to find this story and enjoyed reading it. I’ll will be here to review on your upcoming chapters in the future, as long as i’m Not busy.

I like where you’ve started, before the canon. It let’s you set up the stage for the plot and establish character personalities, which I love a lot. On top of that, I love your writing style, the prefect mix of thoughts, descriptors, dialogue and action.

I am really liking Ginmu, even though there’s a lot that still needs to be revealed about her. She’s an interesting character and I am really interested to know how she will interact with future characters, especially Allen, after knowing how he was when he was younger. Oh, though with how this chapter ended, she might be meeting Allen sooner rather then later.

What a cliffhanger to leave us on lol. It makes prefect sense, though. I wouldn’t be surprised if Cross was the guy who impregnated Ginmu’s Mother, considering his... like of having many women (let’s put it that way lol). In fact, I would not be surprised if he accidentally left several kids around the world. Either way, I am surprised that Cross is claiming her as his child. Does that mean that he saw her fire Judgement and saw potentional for innocence in her? Is Allen still with Mana at this point, or has Cross already took him in? So many questions!

I wonder if Judgement felt the DNA of Cross in Ginmu and reacted to that, allowing her to try firing it. Or maybe she just had a potentional and that was enough to have Judgement let her fire it. Speaking of, I wonder what innocence she’ll have. Since there hasn’t been any mention of deformities, i’m Guessing hers will be an equip type. As for shape and powers, I don’t have any clue. That will probably be revealed in future chapters.

All in all, I really enjoyed reading these first few chapters and I can’t wait to read more! I hope you have a great day and thank you for sharing your story with us.

Please update! This is really good!

I literally couldn't stop reading this as soon as I started, and it's really nice how you explained she was actually athletic in her previous life, because it explains how she knew methods of training. Anyway, before I go in to a speech, hope you update soon, bye~

Please update... Don't leave us hanging...

The moment you mentioned a familiar gun I thought 'Judgement'. And when she fired Judgment, my thoughts sounding something like 'Holy crap she fired Judgment, Holy crap she must be related to Cross, HOLY CRAP CROSS IS PROBABLY HER FATHER IT MAKES SO MUCH SENSE WHY DIDN'T I THINK OF THIS BEFORE!?' Lol. Man... I hope you are still working on this. I have only found like five (give or take) SI for D Gray Man, and this is BY FAR the best so far.